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  • From ANON - Stacy on November 26, 2012
    Horrid. Quit writing.
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  • From bloodshound on November 10, 2012
    YAY! *bounces, update! it's been soooooooooooo long!
    whoa, blinks... so, does this mean draco has finally managed to lose the Solmem spell, or just loosen it a great deal? What about his shadow coating, are they still attached and if not, will har learn of it. can't have blondie there roaming around flapping his lips at inopportune times... though it would give har a nifty excuse to kill the vamp.

    thestral's huh. well, i suppose they are an interesting study and since this fic has diverged from canon a great deal, har never got to use them in a rescue flight. this way he can get to know and know of them under more controlled circumstances.

    oh, wow, that really is a serious over site there Cissa. that's practically giving the dark lord a free 'in' to her home whenever he pleases. it'd be just stupidity leaving that in place especially as cissa has to know who bella is loyal too. not thinking things through hard core. i mean, sure bell bells might be a bit unsure in her loyalty atm but not so unsure that she'd balk at her lords request. and now that they know who was responsible for basalisk death, that's just one more strike against silly cissa and her deluded off spring.
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  • From bloodshound on September 07, 2012
    And mooney stands triumphant as we all knew he would. Yay for human guile and wolf cunning.
    Vol-die's gonna be pi-isssed *sing song. Good thing Grayback died in that debacle or V would've crucioed the prick to death himself for that failure. he doesn't take failure lightly and losing control of all the lycan's in Briton counts as a pretty epic failure. :P
    Guess he's going to have to re jiggle his plans pretty sharply since the wolves are now totally for the shadows, bet on it.
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  • From Yaoilover816 on September 06, 2012
    You are an amazing writer the fight scene was so exciting to read; I can't wait for more please update again soon.
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  • From twilitdragoneye on September 06, 2012
    Oh gods above yes!!!! My wolves chapter!!!!! I absolutely adore it. Completely and totally. You mixed the wolf side and human side of Remus quite well, and the comparisons between him and the other wolves were great! It's too bad we don't get to see Greyback bow to Remus but his death is an acceptable exchange. I can't wait for Harry's reaction, not to mention Sirius! See you next chapter!
    ~Pen
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  • From ANON - Miri Daray on September 06, 2012
    Go Lupin! Love the way you wrote the battle!
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  • From Black_Angel on September 05, 2012
    I absolutely love this story! It is so much better than most Dark Harry stories that I've read. You really have thought of everything and I just can't wait for the next chapter! I'm glad there are still fanfiction writers out there who actually know how to write and have a plot that they follow and don't just lose all points in response to readers who wont just take what the author has in mind. I really hope you keep writing and I can't wait to see what you have planed for Harry and friends.
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  • From bloodshound on August 24, 2012
    hmmmm, well, i suppose it doesn't hurt padfoot to indulge a bit from time to time and physical combat is a good way to channel stress and anger.

    *mock applauds . Way to go Fawks, how to totally lose your potions master. There are times when death is a mercy and Fawks, (shock, horror) lieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed. :P That's so going to come back and catch him in the neck.

    does this mean that dumbles has to haul the fat, smarmy bloke out of retirement now?

    Does sev get to keep his scintillating personality or does he become something like a potions brewing zombie now?


    "You know what I'm thinking B1?"

    "I think I do know what you're thinking B2."

    *together "It's snake rescuing time!" ^^

    V is indeed in for a very busy month.
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  • From LadyFreak on August 24, 2012
    Interesting tale you have here. Ginny is definitely disturbing me though *shudder* Loved how Harry got back at Voldemort for his claiming.
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  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on August 23, 2012
    I hope you know you are the master of fanfics! And i bow before you!
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  • From teriwright on August 15, 2012
    Gah!!!! i stumbled upon this story through your newest one and have now spent the last few days reading possession and weapon. I just love this AU and harry's evolution into a powerful leader. i'm looking forward to more updates soon and the realization of harry's 2nd vision. More please!!
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  • From bloodshound on August 12, 2012
    It doesn't surprise me that Sev isn't being easy to break. He's a skilled and stubborn man, much good it does him now though.
    Xoui huh. How do pronounce that? Yay, that basilisk captives will soon be sprung. I wonder if they'll have much info on Cissa and how did the shadows manage to winkle their way into the manor? I thought i was locked up tight like a bank vault?

    yeah, it figures the old goat would send Siri on a wild critter hunt to keep him out of the way. He is so going to pay for that. hmm, that would explain a lot. So, they sort of teach their servants different ways to channel the same magic that they can use in the regular wizarding way? It makes a sort of sense. Magic is a form of energy after all, which is convertible and divertible. Hopefully Siri shouldn't be to hard to teach, especially as he's already done it by instinct.
    Just how self aware will be Sev as a shadow minion?

    Oh, good. So no one can just wipe out the Dementors. Since they're minions of har, that's a good thing, even if they are vile creatures. would har's shadows be able to kill them apart from 'eating' them? Well, ICK. I hope no one is mad enough to try that method. Not the end I'd wish for that.

    Those who's souls are chomped, never get to go to an after life do they? They just cease to exist as if they never were? That isn't a punishment to use lightly.
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  • From ANON - EvilDime on August 10, 2012
    Neat chapter!
    I like the shadows'.. personality, if you can call it that for a group of beings. They are funny sometimes. ^^
    It's driving me mad that I can't think of what it is that Sirius is missing! Feels like it should be something obvious from the rest of the story. Hum, maybe I just need to re-read it all again...? *ponders*
    Anyway, as always I'm looking forward to more!
    - Dime
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  • From bloodshound on July 31, 2012
    *perks up. Does this mean Fire Dragon will be getting an intro soon? Nice creative use of not to subtle blackmail there Siri. Make the point with a mallet why dontcha mate. :P ... was that a typo? dual (two or double) for duel (arranged fight)?

    right, typo two Violation for Volition I'll give you. Easy mistake... i get that one wrong too. >>'

    finally the light begins to dawn on dear Cissa. She is a nothing that has nothing to offer in the way of enticement. Not that she won't try anyway, but that's what the delusional do. :D

    that's an interesting thought. can a mental landscape be limited or expand exponentially? So Shell Har is still very much in evidence and control?

    heh, i wonder how long snape can last before he yields to the inevitable and lets the shadows take him. ^^ The insight into V's mind was interesting too.

    Poor, hard up Har. If that's going to happen every time he brushes v's mind, fighting is going to be very interesting. XP
    seriously, nicely done though. Oddly enough you don't run across many masturbation scenes in fan fics. Well, not that I've found anyway.




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  • From ANON - EvilDime on July 30, 2012
    Mroar! Lovely chapter. ^^
    It's confusing though having Sirius working so thoroughly for both sides. (o.0)
    - Dime
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