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Reviews for Better Than Cookies {COMPLETE}

By : crmoon
  • From dominique1 on September 04, 2008
    remus was killed by bella and now his alive than you had abetrayer in it was a malfoy but they wore ployjuice as one
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on September 01, 2008
    Ok whats happening now, I am kinda getting confused. I somehow cant keep up with the twists anymore
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  • From Carmeleyes23 on September 01, 2008
    WTF nothing made sense...explain please
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  • From Kip on August 31, 2008
    Enthralling! Far-too eagerly awaiting the next update. 'Purr
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  • From voldemortsgrl on August 29, 2008
    Someone is going to die. More please.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on August 29, 2008
    Damn and just when you thought it couldnt get worse it just does. *sigh* I sure do hope Draco does something to help Voldemort get Harry back and who was that person who took them back
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  • From LydiasTravel on August 24, 2008
    Excellent Update. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - selene on August 20, 2008
    Hi,

    I love this story. I hope you're going to post a new chapter quickly.
    Thank you
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on August 19, 2008
    Damn and just when I thought everything would be alright. Now I wonder who that bloody spy is. I hope Voldemort will get Harry back soon
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  • From stargirl77 on August 18, 2008
    I really like this story and can't wait for more. I'm a writer as well (though nothing is published here) and have some advice: it's very confusing to say "the spy" and then use the plural they and their when talking about him/her. I've been told by teachers to either use a pronoun or to use it. It might clear up some confusion!
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  • From dino1 on August 18, 2008
    Well that took balls. I wonder if fenrir will be able to catch the scent of the kidnapper? Tom is gong to be blowind his stack when he wkes up. Can't wait for more.
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  • From dino1 on August 17, 2008
    Yay an update! Can;t wait for tom/harry action. Can't wait for more information about the bonding method used in this story. All of harry's mates will be happy to see him. Still will their wives be jealous?
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  • From bumblebee on August 16, 2008
    I must say this story is unpredictable. I try guessing what would happen but turns out differently. Very interesting.

    BUT Why did you kill Remus?! I can see it was Sirius that he met (I think) and I felt happy for them. But why oh why? I could try to guess that you might somehow bring the dead back, but I might be wrong again, lol.

    And when will Harry be with Voldemort? So wanting to know.

    I do hope you will update soon! I'll be waiting.
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  • From OutlawAngel on August 16, 2008
    MORE!!!!!! It is getting interesting!!! I can't wait for the next chappies!!! Will Harry accept his mates??? 'Cause actually he was forced,
    or will he evene survive?? waaaaa, please please update as soon as possible!! Keep up the good work...

    Ya ne!!
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  • From TiffanyAK on August 14, 2008
    This is actually getting a bit creepy. I wonder what'll happen next. Cheers!
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