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Reviews for Better Than Cookies {COMPLETE}

By : crmoon
  • From voldemortsgrl on June 11, 2008
    What the hell is going on? At first Voldemort acts nice and tries to help Harry, now they are all going to rape him. I'm very confused. What is the deal with Dumbeldore? He wants to put Harry in St. Mungos? What the fuck is his problem. I must say, to have Remus rape Harry is kind of something Voldemort would think of and it is a nice twist. I would like to know what Harry has that Voldemort needs. And what is the potion Severus is brewing for? It has something to do with a bond right? Well, is Voldemort going to bond with Harry? And what the hell is the prize for the person that makes Harry scream the loudest? I really do like this story, though it is getting a bit confusing. Could you please explain what is going on a bit better? I'm not saying that you have to add more detail or go back and fix the chapters already posted, just explain the stuff in later chapters. And if some of my questions were answered in the story, I apologize for not seeing them. Please update soon. I await your next chapter. And please make it long.
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  • From ANON - celtic_creature on June 11, 2008
    Whoa! Intense chapter. Poor Sevy. Please update soon, I love this story
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 11, 2008
    Damn Dumbledore for doing such a thing to Severus, I just hope Voldemort gets to Harry before Dumbledore does.
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  • From voldemortsgrl on May 31, 2008
    More please.
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  • From voldemortsgrl on May 25, 2008
    Can someone shoot Bella? She is such a pain in the ass. Why can't she just leave people alone? Where the hell is Harry? When will the potion be ready? More please. This is a very good story so far and I cannot wait till the next chapter. Please update as soon as you can.
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  • From Selera on May 25, 2008
    Dang it.. dang it dang it.. Want to see more of this.
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  • From voldemortsgrl on May 19, 2008
    More please...I think it would have been cool is Severus took care of Harry. I really like this story. I'm not sure what to think about Hermione yet. Please update soon.
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  • From alma on May 15, 2008
    Looking good can't wait for more.
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  • From alma on May 15, 2008
    Good start.
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  • From voldemortsgrl on May 13, 2008
    more please...this is interesting...
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  • From Selera on May 13, 2008
    I'm so glad to see this update. It looks like it will be an amazing story.
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  • From Demonicone on May 06, 2008
    This story is interesting. Although it would be better if you separated the beginning like you did at the end so its not all lumped together. I have never actually read a story with Severus/Hagrid as a pairing, slightly creepy but not that bad. ^^ I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From lovemeornot on May 05, 2008
    no way I can't wait to read the rest of this . It's such a shame that this is a sorely neglected category I'm glad to see you adding to it especially with a piece that promises to be hot
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