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Reviews for Plan B

By : ApollinaV
  • From MollysSister on November 26, 2008
    That bit about Hermione baiting Snape with questions is hilarious. It smacks of truth--I bet he was painfully easy to poke into a temper. I am thankful HG is finally academically happy. Its a bout time.
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  • From MollysSister on November 26, 2008
    I really enjoyed seeing a sweaty powerful Snape. Maybe next time he could be naked too?
    Selling Voldy's soul was rather anti climatic wasnt it? How will she inform the magical public? Rita? :D
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  • From MollysSister on November 26, 2008
    "riddle, pardon the pun" Mawhahahahha! Too funny. Ouuuuu calling a demon, thats serious shit. Demons are rather rare in fanfic. I wonder why that is? only one villan allowed? I wonder what the price of voldypant's soul will be? I hold out for an ache free life. I am vain like that.
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  • From MollysSister on November 26, 2008
    Now how is HG going to get around that pesky problem of the prophecy? I dont doubt she has it all figured out.
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  • From MollysSister on November 26, 2008
    Is this the chapter where the lizard wizard was born? tee hee. I adore your brash Hermione to the tips of my very toes. Draco folded like a house of cards. Piffle.
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  • From amsev on November 17, 2008
    What a wonderful take on ridding the HP world of MoldyVoldie. Phew, and what a sexy slow seduction of Our Hero and Heroine. Please do write more and more and more!
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  • From flowerthefabulous on August 16, 2008
    That was without a doubt one of the best fanfictions i have ever read. Normally i don't like stories written from the first person perspective, but you completely engrossed me in her thoughts and emotions! Beautiful,engrossing, and well written congratulation on your work.
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  • From Moyra on August 08, 2008
    i absolutely adore your writing style. Its quite fascinating, it draws you in, deeply, you simply can't stop reading. And yeah to the fantastic lemon chap, it got heart, body and soul. A demonly quality !?!
    I dearly hope you're going to write more HG/SS.
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  • From CB13 on August 01, 2008
    Thank you! Like other reviewers, I really enjoyed how you altered Hermione's trust horizon, for lack of a better term. She seems to trust herself more than she trusts Dumbledore's intentions, more than she trusts Harry's "destiny." Good for her; she's smarter than those turkeys any day of the week.

    Speaking of days of the week, I'm sorry you had a yucky Sunday during Mardi Gras! I know the slushy hues of which you speak....and that's not the sparkle of clean water on the streets, either. Ugh. But if there was a parade that day (or even the day before), then I can assure you that Lent, which begins the Wednesday after Fat Tuesday, had not yet begun. My point was just that since Lent starts on a Wednesday, by the time the first Sunday in Lent does roll around, the city has had the better part of a week to clean up.

    Looking forward to your next story. You write well!

    Cheers

    CB
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  • From Lauriurix on July 30, 2008
    I soooo liked this journal story type, normally i hate em but you made me like em :D

    hope u write more :D
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  • From DarqueHart on July 30, 2008
    Thanks for the wholly irreverent smashing of the 'canon'; it was delightful.
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  • From midenwac on July 30, 2008
    Bloody hell, I loved this story!!! Great job! I'm sorry it's over(at least in this universe ;) )
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  • From neelix on July 30, 2008
    My gut feeling is you should get stuck at Atlanta airport more often.

    Awesome last chapter... excellent! Thakns, great fic!
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  • From CB13 on July 29, 2008
    My dear A.V.,

    I'm not even through Chap. 5 yet, but I do feel compelled to point out that this sentence, "When I arrived in Diagon Alley it looked like Bourbon Street on the first Sunday in Lent." would be more effective if you changed "Sunday" to "Wednesday." Though it may not seem like it in our post-Katrina world, New Orleans is very, very good at cleaning up the Mardi Gras mess. It doesn't linger; by the time the first Sunday in Lent rolls around, Rue Bourbon is sparkling.

    And now, back to our program.

    (Thanks for writing!)

    Cheers

    CB
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  • From CB13 on July 29, 2008
    A.V.,

    What a marvelous premise! I'm only on Chapter 3 and I have to tell you, good show! It's well-written, it's crisp and concise, and it has an interesting and riveting plotline. And the best bit is, you say it's already complete!

    Thanks for sharing it with us.

    Cheers,

    CB
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