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Reviews for Plan B

By : ApollinaV
  • From CanadianGinger on July 24, 2008
    Oh really good, too bad Hermione wasn't as bad ass in the books, would have made things more interesting. :) Update soon.
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  • From DarqueHart on July 23, 2008
    Snape should have discussed terms with Hermione before they called the first demon! His were very specific, but hers! That was way to ambiguous and open-ended. All she claimed was that 'she would never compel anyone to suffer her presences'... the rest was mumblings the demon made. I would think that what was specifically stated by the deal-maker would be what was to be agreed on, not suppositions on unvoiced thoughts. Don't like the sound of that.
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  • From NataliaGAG on July 23, 2008
    I like your idea, very different. I'll be waiting to know what happens next.
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  • From neelix on July 23, 2008
    oooohh, this is getting good...please update faster, I'm on the edge of my seat...!!
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  • From helenesnape on July 23, 2008
    Hmmm...so Hermione desires a mate. This could get interesting. I'm suspecting the demon to use 'Slytherin tactics' to get Hermione's price to be 'paid in full.' I can't wait to see what dirty tricks will be up the proverbial sleeves of the involved parties to perpetuate or prevent the demon's 'payment.'

    Please update soon. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter to see how it will all come together.
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  • From DarqueHart on July 22, 2008
    Laughed like a Slytherin at this line - '...a fragmented soul is still a soul, and this belongs to me. Ergo, I can sell it.
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  • From DarqueHart on July 22, 2008
    Okay, I don't know how constructive it is, but your characters a little overdone. Maybe you've done it on purpose, as in a parody. I really like the story so far, but, wonder where you're characters will end up with them all on this high octane character portrayal. I don't think you've got them wrong, just played to the hilt.
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  • From DarqueHart on July 22, 2008
    OMG - it's a good story! At least I love the first chapter...
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  • From neelix on July 22, 2008
    I really like this and the way it's written from Hermione in the first person, its different and very clever. I also like the premise of the story, interesting idea!!

    Hope you are quick with the updates...!
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  • From helenesnape on July 22, 2008
    I love it that she 'owns' Voldemort's soul! (even if it is just an insignificant sliver of it)
    That ought to make for interesting dealings with a demon/devil...whatever you wish to call it. I suspect Voldie is going to be pissed when he figures out that his soul is no longer his own.
    You've definitely put a strange, but intriguing spin on this tale. I look forward to your next update.
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  • From crinna on July 22, 2008
    oh wow good idea. a demon is definitely unique(and brilliant.) i like the little thing about the muggle hand signal for holding a phone. little things like that make her character more honest and believable. i am eager to read more.
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on July 22, 2008
    Excellent start
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  • From ExpectedAberrance on July 21, 2008
    Unfortunately, the good fics never get reviewed. I find this one quite intriguing, as it's the first in a while for which I haven't a clue as to where it's headed. Overall, I like the voice you've created for Hermione, though personally I'd hear it a bit different, more voluble perhaps, but it's all perspective. Do you use a beta? Also, you might consider posting this on another archive, maybe Ashwinder or Petulant Poetess; readership is more dedicated there, and you get more useful feedback. Regardless, please continue, as I'm sure I'm not the only one liking this fic. Cheers!
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  • From KraeHi on July 21, 2008
    Hey this is a good story, waiting for the next chappie. :D
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  • From crinna on July 21, 2008
    great start its nice to See her taking charge, and not following those two bumbling fools into danger without a sensible plan. just be careful not to make Hermione to smart/powerful or she may come off as a little Mary sue. dot get me wrong i dint see this happening so far.
    i cant whait to find out her plan
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