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Reviews for Sirius Dreams

By : HalfUnderwater
  • From Inazuma on July 20, 2011
    Brilliant! The most gratifying, well-written HP fic I've read in a while. I absolutely love this pairing. Please write more! :)
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  • From GudenMulle on June 07, 2010
    Fantastic! :D. Messr Moony has very good taste in late-night-snacks. Both the guy and the cake ;)
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  • From ANON - Meh on November 11, 2009
    I found this story very satifying to read. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - MissBea on October 19, 2009
    oh i am so so happy that you've finally updated. keep it up, i love this story!
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  • From ANON - shouldbestudying on October 02, 2009
    Reading this is effortless - lovely wording and grammar. What I noticed is how your dialogue is seamlessly English (or as far as I can tell, but I'm Australian, which I hope is kind of closer than most), even in moments when I notice most authors slip into a more generic register (ie in the middle of sex, which really throws you off, come to think of it - Remus' "this feels odd" is great.)

    Remus and Sirius' characterization is wonderful and consistent and the whole fic had a kind of gentle realism to it that made it feel strangely poignant at times (Remus' sudden fear of being a quick shag in the broom closet; the fact that they don't kiss and make up quite immediately.) I guess criticisms would be Sirius' "hiding" of his feelings (which didn't seem apparent to me) or the blandness of the female character (I mean, slag), which might have been fleshed out more to make that aspect a little more edgy, but to be honest I think these are more criticisms of the genre as a whole, either slash (how often do you even see a female character in slash?) or romance, and certainly nothing worth worrying about. In fact I think those all fit in well with the tone of the fic; all the emotions certainly rang true, which is what is important.

    This is just a a joy to read; it's everything I hope to find when I'm looking for some quick slash to distract myself. Shit, there's just something so on the money and perfect about it that makes me wish there were so much more slash writers like you. You don't appear to have written anything else but you bloody well should.
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  • From Nubiti on June 28, 2009
    Don't you dare stop writing now! It's really a joy to read this, good plot, nicely written, no wrong use of grammar. Sigh, please do continue. I'll be waiting :D
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on April 19, 2009
    Interesting direction of plot. Please update this fic once more when you have the chance.
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  • From ANON - Bluestocking Suffragette on April 17, 2009
    I really hope there is going to be more to this story...if for no other reason than I want to hear Sirius' explanation for his behavior! The fic is smoking hot and well-constructed, with the portrait of Sirius drawn through Remus' eyes clear and fuzzy at the same time, the way we all see our lovers. Good stuff. Write more!
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  • From LisaT2525 on April 01, 2009
    This is such a great story, I hope you continue!
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  • From ANON - bea on March 11, 2009
    Ok. you need to update. because this is an AMAZING story! please please update soon :)
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  • From LuciTM on February 10, 2009
    Sigh... Sirius, that whore. He really should have known better. And now he's hurt my poor Remus. *shakes head*

    Hmm... I was wondering today, how the belief came about that Sirius was such a manwhore. I mean, I know it said in the books that girls fancied him, but they never said that he took advantage of that fact.

    Eh, I guess it's not important. If he DIDN'T, then there wouldn't be a handy built-in problem with his potential relationships. And of course, he wouldn't be the manwhore that we in the fanfic community all know and love.

    Speaking of love, I love this story. It's amazing. You NEED to update it.
    Please?
    I can't wait to see how Sirius tries to justify this.

    And again, poor Remus.
    *huggles*

    love.
    luci.
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  • From BrianLovesJustin on February 10, 2009
    Bloody Sirius, if I could I would strangle him myself, honestly I know they are teenagers but he could have at least done it somewhere else where Remus wasn't sure to find him. Dumbledore's comment *I must admit, I was the same in my younger years* made me chuckle. I do like this story, I've just started reading Remus/Sirius stories after 9 months of Drarry and Snarry and this one caught my eye.
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  • From Yarou on February 10, 2009
    Holy Mother of Mary in Heaven. I was soooo not expecting that. I nearly wanted to cry. I hope there's an explanation though for hurting poor Remus. I love him you know. Well, his character. And I hate to see him in pain. -sigh- I'm the type of girl that likes happy endings. -nods- So let's see one! Or not... -shrugs- Hopefully we will. :) Thanks for writing this nice little chapter and I can hardly wait for the next one.
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  • From Yarou on February 07, 2009
    :) That was wonderful. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Alesia on February 06, 2009
    That. Was. AMAZING. I loved it!!!!! It was so descriptive! Absolutely perfect. I just wish it wasn't a oneshot--I would read it as a story.
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