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Reviews for White Flag

By : bittsweetmis
  • From ANON - hpyaoi on May 30, 2010
    I like it!! hope you write more soon. wanna read more. it's not often you find a good and well writen story like this, so keep it up your good:)
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  • From keraizaki on March 16, 2010
    Awesome! ^^ This is my second ime rereading this story, and it's still good! XD Good luck with Uni~ Write More Soon Please! :3
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  • From ANON - Bryonia on March 06, 2010
    Brilliant! Please update soon. And if you would alert me when you update that would be great.
    Your loyal reader,
    Bryonia
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  • From bloodravyn on December 06, 2009
    i like it
    please post more, soon?
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  • From irtenor10 on December 04, 2009
    I have just finished reading what you have posted so far. It is very good, and I can't wait to read the next instalment.

    Please add me to your alert list.
    irtenor@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - Lina on November 29, 2009
    Great story, thanks for sharing your work and I can't wait to read Harry's first meeting with Edward! ^_^
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  • From Leentjef on November 27, 2009
    very very good story
    keep up the graet work and post sooon
    bye bye
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  • From keraizaki on November 25, 2009
    Ch 5 review: I really liked this chapter, and I like how you protrayed Moony! :3
    In responce to what you wrote at the bottom: Yes, what you say is mostly true. About 90% of americans are christin (I don't have a relagion), and all the older generation, who are the only ones with a say, are homophobic. The younger generation is better, with many people comming out at being gay, and even more about being bi (like myself), though there is still so shit with the kids (mostly in the sotheren states). Yes, we're in debt, in a depresion, hiped up on pills, high on drugs, drunk on achoical, and overweight. Yes, we're a train reck! Oh Well~ PLEASE WIRTE MORE SOOON!!! XD

    ~Kera
    (you can e-mail me a reply at keraizaki@yahoo.com)
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  • From ANON - tayla on November 21, 2009
    i just wanted to say that i luv that story and i have been a fan of your writing and i just wanted to say thank you and would you please update this story i really want to see the reactions of the cullens when they meet harry and the crew thank you loads and luv it
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  • From mrequecky on November 19, 2009
    Loved the updates >D
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  • From ANON - Lily_Flower on November 12, 2009
    Hello.
    I want to say that your story is good, and that I do hope that you update soon.
    However, this is not entirely why I'm writing this. The reason I'm writing this is because of what you wrote on your AN in the beginning of the chapter. So saying, I hope you read this in the calm manner in which it was written and meant to be read.
    Now, I know that taking criticism can be quite hard, especially when you put so much work into your stories, but I have to say that what you wrote got me a bit miffed. Personally, when I see mistakes in a story that I really like, I point them out to the author, not in some petty attempt to be "patronizing", but in the hopes of bettering the story and the way that the author writes. This is, to my understanding, why authors make their works public; so that they may gain an understanding and better themselves as artist through creative criticism and feedback.
    From what I read of the review, I believe that it was not the reviewer's intent to sound "patronizing", simply to pay you a compliment and point out an error in you work. I think you overreacted, and behaved in a very ungrateful manner. Your attitude towards the reviewer was quite rude.
    Secondly, though obviously werewolves do not in fact exist, there are certain things that remain a constant in almost every tale told about the mythological beings, the fact that they react unfavourably to silver being one of these. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I do believe that this is common knowledge to almost all persons who know such tales. The reviewer did in no way state that you were an idiot, and I see no reason for you to have to state that werewolves do not exist. This seems to me as if you were insinuating something about the reviewer's intelligence, as you accused her/him of doing about yours. And as you had never before stated that your Remus would not be allergic to silver, I believe it was just the reviewer trying to point out another of your mistakes.
    Thirdly, and lastly, there is no way that such a small piece could correctly convey a tone, as there is not nearly enough adjectives. I believe, again, that you simply overreacted. And may I just say that even if the reviewer had been absolutely scathing, you should not react like this. If I had gotten angry at every bad review I have gotten, then I would have gone postal by now. You need to grow a thicker skin, because there will be worse reviews than that. Those are, after all, the repercussions of making you works public.
    I have left my email address in case you wish to contact me regarding this. Please know that I am in no way writing this to hurt or insult you, just to let my views be known.
    Thank you, LF.

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  • From ANON - spikesbitch on November 12, 2009
    i'm really enjoying reading this story. Thanks for writing it. please add me to you mailing list for updates. tanyajones71@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on November 11, 2009
    Awww...you could at least have let us know which Cullen was there. I'm guessing it was Emmett, since he's the 'straightest'-looking of the three 'boys' (I said it like that because they're waaaay older than the teenagers they're portraying).
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  • From ANON - Sarah on October 19, 2009
    Good story and great incorporation so far with the Twilight series...I just hope that it goes better than the rest of the Twilight books did after New Moon...in the words of a friend, they were like reading bad fanfiction.

    I hope you update soon, I would volunteer to be a beta, but since classes and working as a CNA takes up most of my time, I would not be very reliable. Please put me on the update list for your fanfiction..fallenangel9969@aim.com
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  • From Elfin69 on October 15, 2009
    Please update again soon, this is a wonderful fic.
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