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Reviews for White Flag

By : bittsweetmis
  • From ConstantSnow on September 07, 2009
    I really like this story, it's interesting, I hope that you update soon
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  • From ANON - Faith on September 04, 2009
    hey, this story is absolutely amazing. i cant wait for an update. just cause i'm not sure where to vote i thing Neville and Jacob would be a good match and Draco with either Angela or Leah
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  • From Hetrah on August 20, 2009
    I love the story. I read the bottom and read what it said about the mailing list...I thought that I might as well join up. I love the fic and I want to see how it turns out.


    My email is: horneysexymama@yahoo.com


    Two thumbs up and a big 10 on the new chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lonelydove on August 17, 2009
    I think Neville with Jacob and Draco with James sounds good.......^_^...Love the story by the way XD I found it and read all the chappies last night ^_^ Can't wait for more =)
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  • From ANON - charlotte on August 17, 2009
    Im already on ur list so thanx for ur email, i can't remember my login lol, my vote is neville,draco an jacob, jus to be annoyin lol i look forward to ur update :)
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  • From danawarner on August 17, 2009
    Cool. I like this story. Dumbles goes too far.

    [He bent down and retrieved a silver ring with sapphires and diamonds hanging on a sliver chain.]
    BTW: Remus CANNOT touch silver {allergic you know}

    And you *really* need to proof-read your chapters (spellcheck won't work if you simply used the wrong words, like 'sliver chain' in above sentence.)
    Update soon.
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  • From ANON - calicat on August 17, 2009
    Wonderful story... you are actually making like cross-overs, I have never found one that actually sounded interesting before. As for pairings, sorry but someone should be straight...Neville with Angela and Draco with one of the La Push wolves...I think Jacob would be a good choice. I would only have him with Leah if he turned out to be her imprint.
    I would like to address somethings said at the end of chap 5. I don't really think you need to apologize too much, it is true that the southeastern part of our country tends to be very Christian and Republican. Thou they are not all closed minded. In truth, there are uptight homophobics in every corner of our country, and probably in many other countries as well. It is a reality in our world that there are people out there like that, and putting a bit of reality into your story is not wrong.
    One last thing... not that I care what term you use, but in America, what you call a canteen, we call a cafeteria. just thought you might want to know in case you want the characters at Forks High to use the right wording.
    Thank you again for a wonderful story...Hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on August 16, 2009
    Neville with James and Draco with Jacob, please! Thank you for the update! It's been a while. I hope life isn't too bad now and that you will be able to update again soon.
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  • From cagna4 on August 16, 2009
    i think you should put draco and leah clearwater together and neville and jacob together. neville could use a big strong man like jacob around just curious if it is before or after he changes. i hope you update soon.
    windingcircle4@yahoo.com
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  • From tilekitten34 on August 10, 2009
    good story update soon

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  • From ANON - Bunnybop05 on August 04, 2009
    OMG Did Fleur dump Bill, does that mean he'll give Remy a ride (literally).
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  • From ANON - Nefarious on August 03, 2009
    Where
    Is
    The
    Next
    Chapter!
    This is getting more and more interesting >.
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  • From ANON - CaitlynMario on August 02, 2009
    Actually, I am from the south in USA, and your statement about the south is generally correct. A lot of people /aren't/ that nice to gays and such; though, through my experiance, people have slowly come to except bisexuals. Now, for other people, I wouldn't know. Just stating what I know. :]
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  • From Selene89 on August 02, 2009
    Would you mind terribly if I borrow the scene where HP and others find out the prophecy is fake. I love that scene and I would like to use something like it in my own story. Please email me at selene-moon-goddess@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Solice on July 31, 2009
    There not exremly homophobic to my knowlege.(midwest girl myself) Oh couse there are the extrems....like everywhere else. :( But it's a pretty good version of America. Sadly I feel myself lucky because I except people the way they are....but alot of people don't like change...and we STILL have racism saddly enough but WHATEVER.

    please contiue,
    Solice
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