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Reviews for Delicate

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From skyeryder01 on November 27, 2019

    Loved this! I did about tear up when Hermione uttered the phrase, but I love what happened after. 


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  • From ANON - Jo on April 04, 2011
    I haven't read any of the reviews but your notes alluded to a less than stellar review board and I can't for the life of me see why. I generally read aff on my phone so it's a royal pain to review and I usually don't but I'm saddened that ppl may have been mean about this story. To me, it seems very sweet and honest and as weird as it is in this context, i'd have to use the term real. It's not the typical dom story one would expect and is more of a story of a young woman who isn't yet secure in her attractiveness and a man who wants a woman to be completly his and only his but is scared that he could never get that so he pushes away good things, thinking they'll soon sour.

    Anyhow, that's enough typing from my very vocal thumbs but I think that it's a lovely, though at times sad, story.

    I hope to see more from you soon. :)
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  • From on March 09, 2011
    I'm gonna be nice and be honest I loved the story but damn next time
    Make it longer and less lyrics . I really did love it other then all lyrics but
    Even those where good songs . Trust me I'm not that old but I love the
    Classics
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  • From karenmiller1972 on September 24, 2010
    Love it! And I love the fact that you didn't immediately fall into the 'known' view of BDSM and D/s. You would not believe the number of conversations I've had that people have no clue what they are talking about. It was so very very well handled. Thank you. Thank you for the wonderful knowledge and the excellent telling.
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  • From vonHardenberg on July 13, 2010
    JKR wanted Severus to be unattractive in the extreme, but casting Alan Rickman as him in the films completely cocked that up. Enjoy your stories, but the HG/SS the best. Gives me a great insight into women as most of the writers are female. I have often wished I could sit and have tea with about six and ask many questions in an uninhibited atmosphere.
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  • From HexxKitten on May 31, 2010
    I have just read ch5 and the song at the end really made me smile.

    The weekend I met my partner (21yrs ago) he reached out and took my hand for the first time as we passed a bar, the song coming out of the open doors was the beatles, I wanna hold your hand. We just smiled at each other and it kinda became one of our first songs ... Thanks for the memory and for your fantastic fanfics.
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  • From jonesrl08 on December 04, 2009
    wow, i really loved this story! and can i just say that severus is soooooooooo freakin hot throughout this whole thing?!?!?!?! gosh i thought i was gonna combust from the heat...
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  • From ANON - Lady Miya (who for some reason, can't log in) on October 11, 2009
    I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS FIC! I mean, your other's have been wonderful as well, but this was just... MORE! It was so focused on their feelings and it was like I was living both of them and it was so well written and WOW! The plot was simple, but yet you made so much out of it! There was never a dull moment and I felt like if I was on pins and needles all the time! The ending was just superb as well! I hate/love open ending beacuse it gives you a oppertunity to imagine for yourself, but at the same time it's nice to know what the author have thought... but this ending just felt so RIGHT! Hm.. maybe that is because I have just written a story which ended with the two main-characters finally had sex, but it really is a wonderful way to end a fic :) And the smut leading up to it was just so hot! I'm not sure who I'd rather be, Hermione or Severus.

    LOVED IT!

    Wish you luck with the next stories :)

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  • From ANON - Gen on September 12, 2009
    I really liked this story. Different and creative. I read through many reviews and they all seemed incredibly positive so was it like one person who didnt like it? Nothing to worry about. Not with about 300 positive reviews.
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  • From smmz79 on September 08, 2009
    ok so i am randemly choosing one of your fics and reviewing so i can respond to your blog i am such a dweeb... i hope you get this... anyhoo... btw love the blog i feel sooo connected... love what is going on with your dramione i just love YOUR draco... yummy... i have a wish for the fic that he acts all macho then at one point gets scared by a shadow or something and screams like a girl how funny will that be anddddd cute.... sorry i just had to make that request.. and yah for the remus fic looking forward to that totally and another luci yippppeeeee is this the girl talk or a different one hell either would be great both would be even better... sorry if i am being greedy about your fics i just love them soooo... ok so yah for you with the movie night you go girl and tell him thank you for inspiring the snape one shot... he sounds yummy... i am recently divorced and well by recently i guess i mean 5 years but i have found that when it feels right to you in your heart then generally it is a good time your heart will not lead you astray just be careful SG also go slow and let what happens feel right do not feel like you have to rush things.. that is my advice from personal experience i hope it helps darling.... :-)
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  • From sirimionefan85 on September 07, 2009
    Great story! Congrats on finishing it!! Such a sweet ending.
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on September 06, 2009
    Thank you very much for this story. I only found a couple of days ago, and I really enjoyed it. I liked the fact that you took a deeper look into a dom/sub relationship. It IS about more than just sex and I really appreciated that aspect of your story. I hope that you get some more positive support, and don't feel discouraged by the naysayers. (In fact, I'd love it if my husband took on certain aspects of the Snape role... ;) )
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  • From Larrabee on September 06, 2009
    I love this story. I love all your stories. But I like how this story is some-what cannon, it can fit in with HP sans Epilogue and part of DH.

    Anywho, I must say, it feels a bit rushed or not quite finished.

    I'm not sure what reviews you received, but never believe that your stories are anything short of spectacular.

    Your always a favorite with me, I like to wait till I know the story is finished before I start to read them, because I hate waiting. I am too impatient for you stories.

    Between you and Ms_Figg, you make the drudgery of everyday life interesting.

    I can't wait for another story!

    All the best,
    Elaine
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  • From ANON - howobscene on September 06, 2009
    I was absolutely blown away by this story. What an amazing job you did capturing the emotion and deep connection of a D/s relationship. I couldn't get enough.
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  • From Amethystique on September 04, 2009
    I'm so sad that this story has left you feeling jaded. I applaud you for taking your writing in a new direction...it helps you to grow as a writer experimenting with new ideas. Personally I really enjoyed reading this work of yours. I have been reading your stuff for eons! It is all engrossing and I appreciate that about an authors work. I don't always review as I read especially if the tale is really intricate, maybe I should have to encourage you! Sorry for my failure to boost your muse. I look forwards to your next work.....whatever it may be! BTW...a sequel would be smashing!
    Love & blessings
    Amethystique xxx
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