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Reviews for Rivalry

By : starstruck86
  • From Tnteacups on April 30, 2017

    Seriously absolutely 100% loved this story. I even loved the way it ended! It was such a cute little high note, it was a perfect balance to the tension of the rest of the story. Also love the way you've written both Ron, and Severus, and all of their interactions. 
    I also really enjoyed how you gave us a closer look at the professor's friendships, and love how Flitwick, Sprout, and Snape all have an obvious familiarty. There were a couple scenes where McGonagall seemed a but out of character, but it wasn't jarringly bad. 

    This is a fairly new pairing for me to read, and I completely fell in love with your rendition of it. 


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  • From Severus1snape on March 27, 2015
    This is beyond amazing.
    Loved the plot, loved the characters LOVED IT ALL.... You are so great at this pairing, really!
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  • From ANON - Kelei on July 06, 2011
    Nice. Firstever ...reverus? Lol. Very good writer you are my dear *checks profile for more stories*
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  • From ANON - accio0greatness on August 06, 2010
    *SQUEE*
    oh goodie.
    thought you should know, you've got me addicted to severus snape. i always loved ron, but i've made my way through your masterlist from remus/severus on, and that may be the smartest thing i've ever done.
    i adore you.
    *gah
    shower!ron smexytimes...
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  • From KohakuShadow on April 21, 2010
    Once again, you've managed to completely distract me from all else reading one of your fics - for DAYS ON END. Absolutely fabulous. So many places had me laughing out loud, and Snape being so...wonderfully and indecisively Snape is always a win for me. I love the use of the other staff members here - how they're all getting involved and cheering them on. And I just keep imagining George teasing Ron about hooking up with Snape that entire holiday they spent together: 'you're shagging the guy who lopped off my ear? I thought you loved me.'

    Stunning as always. Now that I've finished reading, maybe I can finally get back to some writing, hm?
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  • From ANON - RmV on December 26, 2009
    Absolutely perfect! One of the best fics I have ever read. And believe me I have been reading a lot... It was amazing how you could make them be just like they are in books (well apart from being dead) and still fall in love O_O And one really good point was that your English was so easy to read, I'm not native speaker so I hate hardtounderstand slang and sentences that are longer than life. I'm going to read your other fics too now that I've read this one. Thanks for the wonderfull fic
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  • From Narius on December 15, 2009
    This story is frickin' excellent! I love Snape in this, and I love how honest they are on the blind date. That's what most people want when they go on dates. No games. Just heavy flirting, drinks, dinner, and honesty. Hell, that's what most people want out of relationships.
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  • From HarryVik on November 30, 2009
    I loved this. I hope you are gonna write more of this kind, Snape/Ron are so few in numbers like any Ron-slash-any-pairing. I have read all your Ron/Snape fictions and i can honestly say that with every fiction you are gradually shaping up. I hope to read more one day for now thank you for your wonderful work on this. Write something new soon. Bye for now.

    HarryVik
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  • From JanisJ on November 27, 2009
    Ah, you've made me so happy once again.... I love UST, especially with such an "unlikely" couple.... but you have such a way with making the unlikely so believable, and make so much sense (you're like a visionary or something).... loved this one as well. And totally cracked up at the "spider/custard" going all over! Mmmmm, I think I need some custard now.... You rock! :) PLEASE don't stay away too long, you're too good at this and I need your updates regularly!

    Just an FYI smile for you-- I've never been compelled to read a vampire fic before I read "invitation" and ended up really liking it, even with the sad ending. And "Seraphim--" I've read it through a couple times now and have rec'd it to my friend, insisting that she read it.... just had to let you know that, even tho' I didn't review at the time. (hey, I already told you I suck at logging and reviewing, just do when I really, REALLY need to! :) Hope you're doing well!
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  • From badkittyuno on November 26, 2009
    It was definitely worth it. Hope we don't have to wait too long for the next one!
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  • From talley on November 26, 2009
    What a beautiful and fun ending to this romance. Adds custard to the body delight list. ;) I enjoyed this one alot. As you know I mentioned wanting to see them fit the relationship into school life and so on. This was a nice glimpse of that. I look forward to any story you write involving Ron, but I do so adore your Severus. Again, enjoyed this and loved loved the image of Ron holding his teddy bear.
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  • From LadyZombie on November 26, 2009
    And a fine ending it was too. Of course I'll be hovering for Ron and Severus' next adventure.



    I see my prediction about the custard was accurate.
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on November 26, 2009
    Squeee!!!!!!

    I knew it would be mind blowing when they got together!!! :D and in Ron's old childhood room!!! LMFAO when Sev thought it was hell because of all the orange!!! Classic!!!!

    This story was so much fun to read, just the way they interacted with one another and Snotty Ron and Snarky Severus at their best!!!!
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  • From ANON - chudeusz on November 26, 2009
    oh, haha, I loved it! Ron and his flowery glittery baths:) That one detail made this good fic a brillant one. I hope you write more, thanks:)
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  • From tambrathegreat on November 26, 2009
    Lovely story. It's my second-most favorite of your stories. Seraphim remains my first. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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