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Reviews for Atlantis - An Adventure

By : TheLadyMiya
  • From LadyBeaver78 on August 28, 2016

    Bloody brilliant...I know it's one of your old stories but I loved it...also I'm so glad you write Voldemort and Hermione...they're one of my favs ships...so thank you...I actually follow you on the other sites as well...


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  • From ANON - on July 02, 2016
    I am late to the game, but I really enjoyed this and hope you continue writing! This is the third of yours I've read and I loved them all!
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  • From ANON - TomioneConvert on February 02, 2015
    Hello, LadyMiya. First off let me tell you how much I enjoy your stories. You come up with the wildest, most implausible plots and yet you make sense of them. Mark of a good writer! I have been loving this story to bits. I love the character development without Hermione or Voldemort losing out on their essential characteristics. If I could, I would like to make just one suggestion... You need a better beta. There are some grammatical errors which I'm guessing are because English isn't your first language. I'd like to extend my aevices if you'd so wish. I'm actually an Editor by profession! Yay, me! Grammar errors are my bread and butter. :) If you want I could take a look at your stories and beta them for you. I hope I haven't offended you. A story reaches absolute perfection with the help of clean editing.
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  • From ANON - k on January 30, 2014
    So I found you by reading shared flame. I read it about halfway through then I gave up on it for a bit. Then randomly picked back up on it. I finished it, then read every one of your other stories. I have to say I love how you give LV and HG different personalities in each story. But also this has been my favorite one so far.
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  • From ANON - Linber93 on October 20, 2013
    Just finished with your story! It is one of the better V/H I have had the pleasure of reading. So original, fun and twisted. But most, I enjoyed the fact that Voldemort didn
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  • From brightneeBee on June 08, 2012
    This was the second story I ready by you!!!! I love love love it! I can only aspire to be as wonderful at writing Tom-Volmione as you!!!!
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  • From moor on January 23, 2012
    This was a really neat story -- loved how you wove the different mythologies in (especially the different writing elements)!

    Also, I was really taken with your characterization (and humanization) of Severus & Tom, and their changing personalities.: )
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  • From N2vivaria on November 16, 2011
    oh merlin, another amazing story Miya! The sleep I lost was worth it although you should be required to write an apology note to my boss for my lack luster performance at work lately :-p I loved your Aluga character and the ending was just perfect. Although I kinda wish you'd hooked Severus up with a girlfriend or even a cat or something since he's about to lose his favorite mudblood to the dark lord AGAIN, I mean really, he has to be tired of that happening by now. Thanks for writing!
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  • From CafeAuLait on May 29, 2011
    Poor Hermione, the girl just can't catch a break. I like how this Hermione is different from the one in The Contract.
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  • From CafeAuLait on May 29, 2011
    I really hope Tom get's his youth back before anything sexual happens. :/


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  • From nonentity on July 21, 2010
    Eep, we're done already? The climax and denouement came faster than I expected. The ending fits the story quite well. I like that Voldie regains his humanity slowly and eventually regains a conscience, so we can be happy that Hermione runs off with him. I really like that Hermione knows that he could be lying about assorted things, but that he understands people better now if he's willing to lie in the first place. In retrospect, it was very useful that he was impotent before he got healed. Otherwise, he may have been more willing to manipulate and force Hermione before parts of his emotional humanity return. I've quite enjoyed your story. I do need to re-read--I don't remember when Lucius went from being civil back to being nasty, alas. Enjoyable sex scenes, and I like that the Order isn't portrayed as being corrupt or bad, even when they're not nice to Hermione.
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  • From ANON - sonia on July 13, 2010
    Oh thank you so very much for completing this story.

    I have loved every minute of it.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From mrequecky on July 12, 2010
    Oh my, loved! Great end to a great story :D
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  • From magentasouth on July 11, 2010
    awwwwww.... wasnt that sweet?! What a nice ending! It satisfied every squishy little girly desire. All is right in the world.
    it sucks that pleasing things have to come to an end, though. The word 'epilogue' leaves me cold these days. (sigh)
    Write more! Your stories are so fresh and different. I cant wait to see what else you come up with.
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  • From QueenRuby on July 11, 2010
    Yay happy ending. and yet at the same time I'm sad to see it over. Hopefully you have another story brewing in that head of yours.
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