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Reviews for Eternity Disrupted

By : Vampirezdarkgurl
  • From bumblebee on April 13, 2010
    Happy Ending! Though I felt the same like you, how the story ended is quite... how do you say... abrupt? Or... I don't know...

    But yea if you get the chance to fix it a bit better, I'll come and read it ^^

    I love it nevertheless!
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  • From SilverLion on April 08, 2010
    I loved it, though I think that the fight was a little too easy. Oh well. Can't have everything. I hope you get some time to re-work it to your own satisfaction. LOL! SL
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  • From Draconis2803 on April 08, 2010
    I think this was a very sweet ending to the story. Great writing. I hope u get inspiration to write another story or one shots soon. ^_^
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  • From bumblebee on April 07, 2010
    whew! Had to read this again from the start. Chapter 16 already? That tells me I haven't been in here for a long while, hehe.
    Anyways, that was fun fun! Hope to read more soon!
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  • From Shannon20 on April 06, 2010
    i want to be on your update list.... I'm loving your twilight/harry potter stories. E-mail - angelatheart15@yahoo.com Thank you!!!!
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  • From RoseKelly on April 05, 2010
    Interesting chapter and Harry's actions. Very interesting. More soon I hope.
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  • From SilverLion on April 05, 2010
    YAY! You got rid of all three of them, AND saved the baby! You rock! *hugs author and snuggles Jacob*
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  • From SilverLion on March 28, 2010
    OOH! Good plot twist! *Valiantly defends author*
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  • From YaoiIsLove on March 27, 2010
    things are getting very interesting indeed...i must say I can not wait for the next update...im glad things are OK from where you stand
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  • From SilverLion on March 23, 2010
    Hmmm...which Bella? Or is it both? OH Please update soon!
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  • From YaoiIsLove on March 17, 2010
    Great Chappy and excellent forshadowing. I'm sorry to hear things are tough at home. Hope things get better dear
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  • From YaoiIsLove on March 13, 2010
    great chapter! I can't wait until Harry gives Edward his ring!
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  • From SilverLion on March 09, 2010
    Can I help rip both Bella's a new one?
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  • From Draconis2803 on March 09, 2010
    BRILLIANT!!! Love the returned edward, no get bella and kill her lol. Excellent chapter again! ^_^
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  • From dracoharry4life on March 08, 2010
    Points to you. The spray, pensieve, and Bellatrix make a good excuse for what Edward did....not to mention it's differet and original.
    I'm glad they are together.
    And, I hope Lestrange gets what is coming to her. Sending her back to Azkaban seems to easy. Besides, she escaped from there. maybe the vamps should just treat her like a bad Vamp...rip her to pieces and burn her..No body..no magic to trace.
    I hate that Edward was with Bella in Harry's house. Will he buy/build him a new one?
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