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Reviews for Eternity Disrupted

By : Vampirezdarkgurl
  • From SilverLion on February 23, 2010
    I'm sure he took the sleeping potion, otherwise this story would be over without being resolved, and you're too good to just let it drop like that. I can't wait to see what's going on with Edward next. Bella's a sadistic, worm-sucking, donkey-blowing, child-touching, revolting, nauseating, vile, yellow-bellied, horrid, putrid, sweaty, cloddish, ass-pillaging, psychotic, cunt whistle (I got that from the webcomic 'Simple Pixel' over at Smackjeeves). Thanks again for including me in your story. It makes this (my 30th year as of today) special.
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  • From ryuchan001 on February 21, 2010
    hey. i'd love to be on the alert list! i read ur first story and this one and i really like it! ryu_chan001@hotmail.com
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  • From clemsongirl89 on February 19, 2010
    This story is great. I love the way the two worlds come together smoothly. I hope that Ginny is not helping Bella. It would be super scary for Harry. I'd like to be on your email alert list. My email is: clemsongirl89@bellsouth.net. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From blizzardflower on February 19, 2010
    I'm really enjoying your story. Please add me to your story allert. My email address is sabarrell@gmail.com Thank you!
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  • From WolfPup5683 on February 18, 2010
    great chappy, that beached whale bella will get hers
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  • From Draconis2803 on February 18, 2010
    ohh i liked this chapter, no bella!!! kill her!!! lol ^-^
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  • From JessytheElvinVampire on February 18, 2010
    is the witch helping bella, ginny? can't wait for the next update!
    jess_McWilliams@hotmail.com
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  • From EarlyDawn on February 17, 2010
    Even if that did sound conceited, you deserve to sound that way. AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! You are doing it again, getting me emotionally involved in the story. Did I say that I had always hated Bella? You just make me hate her more?(but in a good way cause once again you are controlling my emotions) God! Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From SilverLion on February 17, 2010
    So which one was I (I'm in this chapter right?)? Was I the teacher or the applicant for the job? And thank you. You didn't have to do it. I was so worried when you said you had it all planned out that asking you to add a new character in would ruin the story. I'm glad you found a way, even if it's a bit part. Thanks. *glomps and huggles the author* Is there going to be another part after you finish this story?
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  • From niremalfoy on February 17, 2010
    Awesome fic!
    I love this!
    Bellas a bitch and i hate her! grrr i cant wait untill she dies!

    I would really like to be added to your alert list!
    I hope to read more chapter soon=D
    Nyre
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  • From Wolfsfrau on February 14, 2010
    Oh i knew Bella had help from a wizard... but whom?
    Bellatrix? that just sucks.... two crazy bitches...
    hopefully Remus will use his brain and think about what edward said.
    =)
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  • From WolfPup5683 on February 11, 2010
    wait the crazy haired witch is Bellatrix lestrange isn't it.... thats who it sounds like to me.
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  • From SilverLion on February 11, 2010
    Don't do it if it's going to compromise your story. I don't want that. It's too good. Is that Bellatrix who's helping Bella? From the description that's who I'd think it was. I wish I was half the writer you are. I can't keep a story going. I can get a start and then quickly lose momentum. It's why I'm a lousy DM for Dungeons and Dragons.
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  • From Draconis2803 on February 11, 2010
    Arghhhh!!! no i thought edward was back then!!! Please, please can he get back on track soon??? great chap as always ^-^
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  • From doxiesmom14 on February 09, 2010
    this is a great story. i thought bella was a wanted criminal
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