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Reviews for The Day I Did Snape-Complete!

By : Koolgirl18
  • From ladylizzy on October 06, 2011
    I greatly enjoyed the story and look forward to reading your other tales.
    My only criticism would be proofreading for grammar and sometimes missed words. I know when you're typing fast because ideas are flowing it is very easy to do. However it can be distracting and can lead to misconstrued meaning by your readers. I have read one or two of your oneshots and noticed they did not seem to have as many of those errors.
    Please don't take it as a criticism of content, I loved your alternate storyline! And I loved a redemption of Tom Riddle. I am one of those people always looking for the good in others, so the idea of redeeming him is one that really appealed to me. I love the strength you gave Ginny and a loving and redeemed Severus and Lucius, and even Draco.
    Very well done!!
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  • From strangebun on September 08, 2011
    There are certain - ahem - chapters that I find myself going back and reading here and there. Great story.
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  • From ktgymnastics on March 21, 2011
    Great story :)
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  • From strangebun on March 06, 2011
    I love the first scene between Snape and Ginny, and the closet scene, but the pregnancy part isn't my favorite. It worked well for the storyline but still, ugh. I'd love to see more shorts and one-shots from you. You're really good at writing the erotic scenes and conveying the emotion creatively. Good job!
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  • From LydiaRavenswood on January 21, 2011
    All in all this was a well written story. There were times where it felt rather cheesy, and I'm not a fan of pregnancy in a story, but it wored well for the storyline. I'd highly reccommend avoiding being too cheesy when dealing with Snape next time ;)
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  • From razzmatazz on January 17, 2011
    Fantastic ending, although I was sad to see it go! I kind of wanted it to go on forever, although that might have been unfair to you in the long run. Still, I will miss the updates and look forward to your next story. You have created a dedicated follower with this story!
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  • From LydiaRavenswood on December 15, 2010
    I've been reading your story over the past week, and I can say I have been enjoying it to an extent. I have had some serious problems with some parts, and I saw you said you changed soem things, not sure what but I hope it was worthwhile. I usually can't stand pregnant sex, it creeps me out, but at least during the sex scenes you don't talk about it. I'll be glad to have one where Ginny isn't pregnant though! Looking forward to seeing how you end this, and hope you'll do another story soon :)
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  • From Padfootsgrl on December 08, 2010
    Good chapter. I can't wait to go back to Sirius and Hermione and them finding out she is preggers.
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  • From Kayrox133 on December 08, 2010
    Okay I am satisfied with the justice doled out by Severus and Lucius. I will be sad to see the story come to an end. Sigh
    in the meantime good luck on your finals

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  • From Kayrox133 on November 10, 2010
    Okay I couldn't leave it alone and find myself agreeing with Canisdraco. Harry and Ron can get together. Please no extensive detail on that pale freckly runt(as I see him in my mind). Give me hot Bill and Luna!! And yes, Ginny will definitely need to wait six weeks after giving birth to have sex but I am definitely up for more Ginny, Lucius, and Severus. Bella needs to know payback is a bitch, Sebastian needs to be humiliated before his father, and again Harry + Ron 2gether 4ever. Lol
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  • From Kayrox133 on November 10, 2010
    Okay I read the whole thing over while having a 5 week old to take care of-not an easy task but necessary. Okay this Snape is nicer and doesn't have me wanting to beat him up so much. If I remember right, the scene with Bellatrix, Sebastian, and Ginny is toned down from the amount of torture. Over all, I enjoyed it and will be happy to read the next chapter.
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  • From Kayrox133 on November 08, 2010
    OMFG! Two new chapters and edits? Okay I am exhasted from my five week old however I will reread the story tomorrow as you suggested. Yippee!
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  • From Canisdraco on November 04, 2010
    Awesome story. Yeah, there's a few little nitpicks I have.. Mostly about how Remus and Serena just fell into place.. It was too sudden, I think. A bit shocking, yea, but there was no set up for it. lol.. But other than that, there really isnt anything worth mentioning. Really good story, good plot, great characters, and awesome sex scenes.
    I REALLY hope you arent done. There are several loose ends to tie up, still.. Bellatrix, for one. I really think Pansy needs to find out about how badly her plan to ruin Ginny backfired, and let Ginny have the last laugh.. -grins- Poor Harry. I admit, he can be a right git, but he has been through a lot after all. He needs to get some... Maybe with Ron. :D lol. And Luna really, REALLY needs to get laid. I dont think the books ever really gave her enough credit. She did quite a lot on her own, but was left as more of just a support character than anything else. It's just not fair.
    What happened to Tom? That's a great idea you had for the magic turning him around, but.. I just keep getting very sad thoughts of why he was taking such a comfortable bath after writing those letters and realizing his guilt and everything....
    Also, you promised a scene with Ginny getting doubly penetrated by Snape and Lucius after the babies were born. I DEMAND DELIVERANCE ON THIS PROMISE!
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  • From fatladysinging on November 03, 2010
    Where'd the story go?!
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  • From Kayrox133 on October 12, 2010
    Okay I will have to get off my butt and send you an email asking about this story. I truly hope everything is okay. I have thoroughly enjoyed it so far however I have tons of ideas on how to punish the bastard however I like your writing style and don't want to appear overbearing. In the meantime, take it easy.
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