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By : grugster
  • From ANON - Hema on September 20, 2015
    Love this story :) though I skipped the slash stuff.
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  • From ANON - Victoria on March 10, 2014
    I suppose I should have stopped and reviewed earlier but I was so engaged in this fascinating story that I didn't want to stop between chapters. You've created a completely new magic world! There are complex new rules and hierarchies and characters and magical abilities. If you changed the main characters' names this is different and creative enough to stand on its own as a fantasy novel, not just as a fan fiction. However, that being said, I love Hermione in this new role as 'pup'. Happy, sweet Draco is a real treat, and so is Snape as a kind protector of Neville. Fabulous story with great sex scenes and fascinating plot and characterizations. I'm eager to move on to the sequel.
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  • From Venetiangrl92 on September 02, 2012
    loved it!!!!
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  • From ANON - QuinnAgain on January 13, 2012
    I loved this story but had serious problems witht the last chapter! the format was awful and made it very hard to read. OF course I suffered through it because your story is fab and i have been waiting for the smut! lol can't wait to read part 2 but please fix the last chapter's format!
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  • From Rookseer on December 05, 2011
    Love the story. Can't wait to read part two!!!
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  • From temptress311 on May 29, 2011

    Oh my goodness he peed on her !!! I loved it it was awful and great at the same time!





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  • From temptress311 on May 29, 2011

    hey
    peeking out from behind the chair.

    it was a great chp I giggled I turned red it was hot but I couldn't figure out how to hide my face and read at the same time lol

    so to make it short I loved it. great job!
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  • From winter748 on May 13, 2011
    Wow. I must admit that when I read the summary for this story, I passed it over. When I saw it again, I thought I'd read the first chapter and give the story a chance. I am so glad that I did. Your writing is excellent and captivating even with the "word usage" errors. They were not bad enough to detract from the story. I would have never guessed that English wasn't your first language. You have created such a unique werewolf society. It is fascinating. I don't usually enjoy slash stories as many are like the big gay fairy went around hitting everyone with fairy dust. I don't have a problem with slash when it's a true part of the story instead of just embedded porn. You have done that by creating a believable society that has it's own rules and mythos separate from the muggle and wizarding worlds. I can't wait for the continuation.
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  • From witch on March 02, 2011
    Please tell me you are going to update this story in the upcoming future?! It is one of the best Hermione/Fenrir tales I have read and it makes me want to weep that it may go unfinished...pretty please? :))))
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  • From ANON - Alexx on November 23, 2010
    Very good story! I'm absolutely addicted =) Can't wait to read the sequel!
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  • From ANON - A on November 22, 2010
    Love it!! Can't wait to read more. So you have many chapters of the sequel written all ready?! You cruel, cruel author to not bestow them upon us right now! lol. looking forward to the sequel with much anticipation.
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  • From circe266 on November 21, 2010
    Mmmm, that last chapter was very sexy. I am so looking forward to your sequel!

    LOL, I love the bonobo analogy. I can't wait to read your Hermione hooking up with Yorik, Severus, and other dominants.
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  • From StillHorny on November 20, 2010
    Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! This is an incredible story, I am glad that you will be continuing it.

    I LOVED the counting, that was great. Now I just have to wait to find out about her passing out?!?!?!

    I know, I am never happy. Only because, I love your writing!!!
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  • From ANON - colao on November 19, 2010
    loved it and can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - MJ on November 19, 2010
    This was a great chapter. I really liked the conflict in both of them. Hermione torn between wanting and being scared and Fenrir torn between doing what Hermione wanted and what she needed. And of course, great smut!!
    I think you probably ended at the right time. I understand you want to change categories and this is probably the best place to do so. Maybe the ending is abrupt, but considering the sequel is close by, it doesn't really matter
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