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Reviews for Harem of the Ancient House of Potter

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  • From EdTheBeast on March 12, 2020

    The reason Su Li should be part, is I always thought they were more Royal, so could be part royal family of Japan as well as China with other family traits of "Demons": Neko and Kitsune!


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  • From eepkiller45 on December 26, 2018

    When is the next one


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  • From Panda_Hero on June 23, 2018

    <3 <3 <3 <3 <3


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  • From ANON - H. on November 05, 2015
    Seeing as it has been a couple of years since the last edit, I figure you have walked away from this particular tale. I just wanted to thank you for the story. It was one of very few that I have read that balanced a story of its own with a good bit of smut. There seem to be two extremes (1. Trying to write serious novel level stories that would be right at home with JKR, meaning no smut or language, or 2. Pure PWP with everyone being miles out of character.) In this, when you wrote a character out of character (Bella Lestrange/Black for example), you actually took the time to flesh out a explanation of why the changes.
    Again, thank you for your work and time.

    (Oh, and if you decide to tack some more on to this, I sure as hell wouldn't complain... :-) )
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  • From ANON - Kat on August 06, 2015
    This is really well done, unfortunately it seems this story will never be completed. I went to the authors page to find out about updates and there is a message up saying the author has passed away
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2015
    "You will be broken" doesn't translate to "Sie wird unterbrochen"!
    The correct translation is either "Du wirst gebrochen sein." or "Sie wird gebrochen sein.", both of which isn't good stile ;)
    In german one would sooner say "Ich werde Dich brechen!" ("I'll brake you!") or simply "Ich kriege Dich!" ("I'll get you!")
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  • From ANON - edwin on July 01, 2015
    More please
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  • From ANON - Riceflower on June 26, 2015
    I really enjoyed this story and hope you continue it. Lots of plots, twists, and finally a story without a lot of Weasly bashing.
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  • From ANON - Jacey on January 09, 2015
    I have just started this story and I like it I was wondering how do I save it so I can continue to read it?
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  • From amcgowan on January 01, 2014
    I can't wait to see Harry and the Harem's lives as they learn to adapt to having a house full of children!! (:
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  • From ANON - DCD on December 30, 2013
    Seriously? Know-it-all Granger as his alpha? Your story already starts to stink.
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  • From ANON - silverwolf on October 16, 2013
    totally a work of art!!!! please tell me theres more to the story, who has kids, do they all get married
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  • From ANON - Luna/Wind on February 13, 2013
    I have now read up through the most recent ch. 56. And now, I am curious to see what's next! Both the evils are gone, Harry seems to have gotten control of his demonic problem, but it seems clear the story isn't necesarily done. I look forward to ch. 57.
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  • From ANON - Luna/Wind on February 12, 2013
    41 chapters in and I love it. The smut as well as the story itself. I'm really looking forward to finding out what Harry will do (or try to do) to reign in his demon, and I want to see how Caley comes around to the 'light' side, so to speak. And that's not even bringing into account the battle with Voldemort and Grindewald.

    That's all, just wanted to say something as I keep reading since there are a lot more chapter to go before I'm caught up.
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  • From ANON - Neogoblin on December 09, 2012
    Hope you update soon to bring this story to it end.
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