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Reviews for Secunda Fortuna

By : angelwarrior1
  • From ANON - alyx on July 05, 2012
    Just do you know i think you are the cruelest person on earth to have left off where you did. its just not fair giving a hint of a steamy situation and then cutting it off. its nice
    to see tom born though it makes me curious what will happen as he grows up. will harry return to the wizarding world while toms a baby? i hope to see more harry/bruce interaction as well as bruce/tom. i think the latter will be kinda cute and funny.
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  • From bloodshound on July 05, 2012
    most interesting. I can't wait to see how tom turns out and how 'harleen' get's found out. ^^
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  • From ANON - Doodle Penguin on July 04, 2012
    You are a cruel cruel person! I have been anxiously awaiting this update and you leave it like this! A cliffhanger! A cliffhanger! I weep as i wait for the next update....
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  • From HeartStar on July 04, 2012
    oh i am so glad you updated i hope to see more when you can if luc fox actually malfoy?
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  • From ANON - bobbie on June 12, 2012
    This story is great! It's a very interesting concept and its really well written. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!!!!
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  • From MissiYoung on June 07, 2012
    Yea, Tom was born! And Batman helped! I kind of expected a slightly cracky scene where Harry beat Joker with a purse or something and Joker ended up taking Harry to a hospital or the police station and asked to be arrested in order to escape the rampaging pregnant 'woman', but this was awesome, too lol. Thanks so much for sharing, I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Grim1989 on June 06, 2012
    see I am here!
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  • From JadenShadow on April 25, 2012
    Maybe the wizard that Batman was talking to should show up?
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  • From ANON - Recordkeeper on April 17, 2012
    So is Harry going to start wondering how Batman knew where "Harleen" was living so knew to take him there? Is Bruce going to notice the scar on Harry's hand, the I must not tell lies one? Or did Harry keep that covered with make up or something? I dont remember you mentioning his scars at all actually. The one on his forhead never went away.

    This was a great chapter as usual. I do hope you get to update sometime soon. This is such a great story keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Yami no Ite on March 28, 2012
    Aghhhhhhh. That is a horrible place to come to the end of the chapters. I love the story, and barring a few grammatical errors in like, the first chapter or two, it was very well written. I will definitely be looking for more chapters to be posted.
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  • From ANON - Doodle_Penguin on March 13, 2012
    An update... AN UPDATE!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YoU THANK YOU!!!! IVE BEEN DYING FOR THIS UPDATE TO HAPPEN!!!
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  • From Leania07 on March 08, 2012
    This is very interesting so far. Didn't know what to think when I read the summery, but I'm glad I gave it a go. You're doing a wonderful job so far, and I hope you have many good days and less bad days. Take care!

    Leania
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  • From bloodshound on March 08, 2012
    considering the circumstances of his birth lil tom looks surprisingly normal. I wonder how many of his former traits he'll take on and whether a good up bringing will make a difference. sighs. har never could do anything normally, even giving birth. :P
    look forward to seeing what happens next.
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  • From JadenShadow on March 07, 2012
    Are you gonna keep Tom's Middle name as Malvolio? or however you spell it......
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  • From vanessaclarke on March 07, 2012
    Yay! Tom is born! That'll be a relief for Harry. Now he can get his magic working for him again and he won't be so slow and helpless. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. It was a tense chapter, I must say.

    With the mention of Vicky Vale I started to wonder which version of the Joker you were going to portray. Nice choice, and very well done. He was good and scary. ^^

    You're doing so well, I don't know that you need the beta. Only one thing popped out at me. This line; "..leaving a relieved Harry in his midst." I think the word you were searching for was 'wake'. Once he left, then Harry was no longer in his midst. But that's hardly note-worthy, and otherwise the chapter was top notch.

    Thanks so much for the update. I love this story! Still the best crossover ever!
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