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Reviews for Secunda Fortuna

By : angelwarrior1
  • From ANON - Althydia on August 29, 2011
    Great chapter again! Now that one secret is revealed, I wonder when and how Harry will learn that Bruce knows other things about him... Also, Bruce's feelings for Harry seem to become more ambiguous. What about Harry's for Bruce? And I liked the part about Harry 'communicating' with Gotham. Will it have an importance for the rest of the story?
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  • From ANON - heartstar on August 29, 2011
    yes it was worth it. i hope to see more soon please...
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  • From ShadowCat13 on August 29, 2011
    I really enjoyed the story. Hope you post more soon.
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  • From ANON - Dru on August 26, 2011
    Wow. this is the first HP/batman x-over i've ever read and i love it. Harry and Bruce are both developing wonderfully and I cant wait to see where they go from here and who was the mysterious wizard that batman went to go see?
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  • From vanessaclarke on August 24, 2011
    I'm enjoying this so much! Love your Bruce. You're really pulling that character off well. He's just the right combination of nice guy and crafty, paranoid freak. Sure he may be smart and mostly benevolent but we all know the guy's got issues. I had a little chuckle about the magic thing. Who else would have immediately drawn that conclusion, and then actually accepted it so easily?

    I also want to commend you on your pacing. Not too rushed or so slow that it gets boring. Always building a little suspense, but not enough to cause frustration. I'm positively riveted!
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  • From bloodshound on August 23, 2011
    I can't wait until Har and Bruce uncover each others secrets... or even better, trust each other with their secrets. after all, Har is going to need someone in the know when he's ready to drop. I'mm a bit worried at the news paper report. If Bruce was thinking, he woulda gone as his street alter ego.
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  • From Orkchild on August 23, 2011
    I surprise myself with how much I enjoy this story. When it was first suggested to me I did not think I would like it but the more of it I read the more I'm drawn into the story. a definite testimony to the richness of your writing.
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on August 22, 2011
    i think that the story is good and the plot is great and i love way that you have harry is a girl and haveing a baby ,. and haveing batman fall in love with harry. i love the story. and can not wait for the next chapter and see what happen next.
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  • From ANON - oOMissGOo on August 21, 2011
    oh so funny, as I read the summary I was laughing my belly out...
    the pairing, I thougt, is a little bit like our Kanzlerin Angelika Merkel in a hot passionate relationship with the Terminator
    but the world is open and so am I *hihi* Batman
    I must say that I rather like your stil and the logik around the illogicality, you now magic, male pregnancy and last but not least superheros

    Liebe Gr
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  • From slytherinheadgirl on August 21, 2011
    I like how things are developing between Harry and Bruce, I wonder how things will eventually end up? I am looking forward to seeing how the both learn the rest of the others secrets. How will Harry handle Batman and such. Great story and I look forward to the next chapter being up soon. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Trin on August 02, 2011
    looking forwards to continuing... but how is Harry...er... Harleen going to react when the magic signature on Mr.Wayne is abruptly different? What if David Forrester carries the belt with him for some reason WITH the coin?
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  • From ANON - SombreNuit on July 23, 2011
    Oh, I've never seen a Batman/HP crossover! But you write really well and I'm intrigued already.
    I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Althydia on July 20, 2011
    Thank you for the great - and long - chapter! I was very glad that Harry understood that Bruce and David were the same person quickly too. I don't really like it when people make him more dense than he truly is.
    Now that they both know more than they let on, I wonder who is going to reveal himself or the other first... And if Bruce Wayne will still be attracted to Harry now that he knows he's a man. And if he will make a move on Harry as Bruce.
    Also, thanks for including things from the wizarding world at Harry's place and for Bruce noticing. Will the wizard he met for information play a bigger role in the story? Since he seemed really interested in finding a pregnant wizard;..
    And couldn't Harry meet wizards (even unwillingly) in Gotham, since the old magic might attract others? I would think it's possible to find wizards in most big cities around the world, even if only a few... But anyway, I'm glad Harry is still friends with David, despite the lies. With the homesickness, Harry needs some company if he doesn't want to go crazy. Right?
    I can't wait to see how Tom will be this time around, and how Harry will raise him (with a magical education? I can't see Harry not allowing it for his son). But first comes the game of hide and seek between Harry and Bruce, I suppose? :)
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  • From ANON - Midnight Fairy on July 19, 2011
    omg!!
    love love love love love love this story!!
    can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - pp_hh on July 17, 2011
    Hey really interesting story so far. Even if Im normally not a fan of male pragnancy I have to admit that your story is well written an nicely done so far. Im really interested how little Tom turns out and when Harry discover who barman really is.
    Thank you for your hard work. Greetings
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