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Reviews for Left For You

By : Araea Swiftwind
  • From ANON - varette on April 16, 2013
    Great story, you really cough my attention I really hope you will update soon
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  • From AbbyRose on February 12, 2013
    I really like your story. I'm excited to see how it will all play out, and I hope you update soon...
    I like your portrayal of Harry and Draco, and I'm excited to see where Harry gets sorted, though it seems like Slytherin will be obvious. I'm also curious as to how everything will end up revealed to the Wizarding World, and how everything will play out. Again, I hope you update soon, :D
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  • From mmichelle97219 on August 16, 2012
    okay i am totally lost we go from snape adopting harry the muggle way to them living together with them being lovers and teaching at hogwarts. what the heck happened in between?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2012
    That last chapter is a little out of no where.did you post it in the wrong story?
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  • From curious123 on August 15, 2012
    its not bad, but what lost me was the way the kids were acting. they talked like adults and not like children, even mature children.
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  • From ANON - noel on August 15, 2012
    good story but i think you updated the wrong chapter 5
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  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on August 15, 2012
    You do realize that your story now makes no sense
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  • From djaddict on August 15, 2012
    Really loved the first four chapters! I really enjoy a good Severus raises Harry story and you set this one up to be a good one.

    Now I can read and see that there would be a time jump but this seems a little extreme. It truly doesn't even feel like the same story.

    Not sure where you are going here, but I for one would really love to see the intervening years in the main story, not a side one.

    I will wait to see what happens next before giving up on this one.
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  • From demonsangel on August 15, 2012
    Ok I'm sorry but that time jump was just way to much. You go from 5 year old Harry to adult Harry. No mention of what happened and how Snape raised him, or his apparent falling out with Draco, or how him and Snape came to be an item or anything. It's just too much. Especially if you are going to leave it up to side stories to explain. Unfortunately, those are things that really need to be part of the story. Not sure if I will be continuing this one sadly, but the first part was amazing.
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  • From ANON - mithrilandtj on August 15, 2012
    What happened?
    Chapter 4 had Severus & 4-yr-old Harry finally becoming father & son, and then in Chapter 5 it's after the war is OVER and it's HP/SS?
    Did you mean to completely skip over at least FOURTEEN YEARS?
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  • From ANON - NickyNakole on August 14, 2012
    Absolutely love chapters 1-4 5 doesn't fit at all so I'm guessing it was a oop-a-update. Kinda glad you did because I probably never would have found this story otherwise! Please update with a real chapter soon. This is such a lovely piece of fiction. Very unique! Squeezed out a couple if tears on chapter 4. :P I'm such a baby.
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  • From tvturtle1 on August 14, 2012
    I hate to point this but I am really confused about chapter 5 it seems really out of place
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  • From RoguesAngel on August 14, 2012
    Love the first chapters but the last one doesn't seem to fit. Sure you got the right story?
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  • From dgraymansorrowinvoked on August 14, 2012
    *is confused* LET IT BE KNOWN THIS IS NOT A FLAME!!! so it went from being a harry/draco fic to a harry/severus fic? >.< dont get me wrong, i am really liking this story, but the way you started this chapter made it seem like it wasnt even part of the same story. it was very confusing other than that as i said, i really like this story. i mught sugest continuing from where you left the previous chapter, or saying how many years later it is/giving an explanation of what has happened in the time that has passed, because the way you wrote it, it seems like not only has many years passed, but also that like the books there was a second battle or something... but that is only my thoughts~ they dont really matter much in this context^^ they are only friendly suggestions from a possibly hooked reader~ Good luck^^
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  • From ANON - Angel_Kellar on July 19, 2012
    Uh... So after my last review i'm probably the last person you want to hear from, but i wanted to say i did find one mistake that i made. When you commented on my review i thought you were talking about teaching kids different languages. Stupid me and my misunderstanding. But it's like 3am, so can you really blame me? haha. Anyways, you can just ignore that part. Sorry about that.
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