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Reviews for The Prude

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From AshleyLara on May 05, 2011
    great story so far. had never really considered the fact that Luscious might be a prude, although I can see it. I've always liked to picture him as the sexual deviant that Hermione thought he was. Well he's coming along at least. Update soon please!
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  • From serinblackmoon on May 03, 2011
    Sorry I missed it when it first posted! I was busy with graduation! I have my A.A now! I can go for B.A. YAY!!! lol

    Now onto my review

    Ch 1:

    Lucius is so calm it's kinda scary. Percy needs to be beaten. And Hermione is now my hero lol. I hope those three men get a big case of Karma Kick Ass lol.

    Ch 2:

    Ok, I can see how Hermione is still furious but resigned and determined to make this special. Lucius seems a wee bit over confident that he can handle Hermione but I'm not counting him out yet lol. Draco is way cocky and I like it lol and Harry and Ron are well Harry and Ron lol

    Ch 3:

    Well... *clears throat* Not sure what to say about that... Ok... DAMN!!!! That is all lol


    Ch 4:

    Oh God, the beginning was great! Only Draco can hold his booze! I love it! The morning started out so sweet and then so passionate and I love how you ended it on a slightly silly and shocking note lol.

    Ch 5:

    Draco likes to push buttons I see lol. And Hermione is so sweet to alleviate Lucius' fears of being less then stellar in the bedroom. Hopefully he'll learn to take the lead and show her what's what lol.

    Ch 6:

    Oi... That man needs a firm shake of reality lol. He's scared so witless of his new world of sex it's hilarious.

    Ch 7:

    Beautiful, though Lucius not really getting a chance to think of what's going on between them gives me a hint lol. I'm glad to see him growing though even if it's only part of him growing and becoming more worldly.


    Congrats on the wedding btw! And I can't wait to see more blogger posts from you to keep us updated!!!!


    Lady Serin
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  • From ANON - Brenna on May 02, 2011
    As always, my love, you've done it again. :) I love this new side of Lucius. He makes me hot and giggle at the same time.
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  • From VeoniaBackridge on May 01, 2011
    I'll try to be more descriptive of what I like in my next review, but right now all I have to say is that I LOVE IT! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - ozarkmoon on April 30, 2011
    1- congrats on wedding!
    2- yeah, school done!
    3- adore this pairing, and your litle twist on it is fabulous. of coure, all your stories are brilliant, but this one is now my fav!
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  • From ANON - Rini on April 30, 2011
    Hermione the Debaucherer and Lucius the Prude. I love it! I didn't know what to expect when you said not to have the usual expectations but this was definitely not anywhere near where I thought you would go.

    You know, I actually think the prude Lucius might even be more sexy (and adorable) than the sexually confident one. And I'm loving Hermione and I even find myself liking Ron, who I usually quite dislike. Percy's a twat as per usual; I hope he gets his just desserts.

    Can't wait for more!

    Rini
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  • From ANON - courtn3388 on April 29, 2011
    I was sooo not expecting this!! I was honestly expecting Ms Granger to be the prude and was pleasantly surprised to find the opposite!! Please update soon I can't wait to see how things unfold between our lovers!!
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  • From ANON - sue on April 28, 2011
    I am so happy for you and your upcoming wedding. I remember a few years ago the pain you were going through and now love has found you and you sound soo happy, busy, hectic but blissfully happy. I am a selfish fan of yours so take this with all the love I have for your writing---For gods sake don't forget us and does your entended know how your muse works? All the best of everthing is what I wish for you!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Smurphy on April 28, 2011
    Excellent chap!!!! I love how hermione is chipping away at luci's sense of propriety one sexual escapade at a time!!! Love it and I love that Draco and Severus kinda caught them!!!!

    Yay congrats sg a wedding!!!! I can't wait to hear all of the details
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  • From dragongirl on April 27, 2011
    Ok I am joining the party with this yummy Lucius........... HOT AMAZING HOT HOT HOT>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 27, 2011
    WOW, I totally missed that!!! Congratulations!!!!!!! I am happy for you. I am in the middle of wedding planning for my sister, so I know some of what you're going through. Enjoy the whole process, hon, even the stressful parts. :-)

    Oh, that was fun, funny and sexy. Thank you! That little horndog just can't keep to herself for a few hours. lol And, poor lost Lucius. How he suffers... LMAO! Seriously though, a part of me does feel a bit sorry for him in his complete confusion and the dismembering of all he knows. She needs to show him about intimacy, too. I think that'll blow his mind; the idea that two people could be close, talk, and be intimate without actual sex. He woouldn't know what to do with himself. lol I can't wait to see what else you come up with for this tale. :-) Thanks again! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - apkblack on April 27, 2011
    Awesome to have you back and awesome to read that you're planning your wedding.

    Whether this is just fluffy time-fill for you or serious writing, either way, it's delightful.
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  • From Gertie on April 27, 2011
    First things first- Congratulations on your engagement!!! I am so very happy for you. You deserve good things.

    Poor poor Lucius, to have his entire world put on it's head. It was lovely to throw a little Severus in there at the end. Of course I wouldn't mind a whole lot more. Let the flood gates open!! Momma needs more!
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  • From ANON - makaem on April 27, 2011
    I'm so glad you bought Snape back. As always, this was perfect.
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  • From KellyJCR on April 27, 2011
    OMG! Congrats on the wedding. I'm so thrilled for you! You desrve all the happiness in the world. Did you ever think you may be a closet exhibitionist? You just love Hermione and her cohorts getting caught in the act. (Well considering the quality of said cohorts who wouldn't want a peek.) I find it hysterical that Lucius can't get over his bodies reaction to Hermione. He has years of sexual suppression stored up. I'm begining to think we haven't even tapped into the passion he's going to find or the power struggle that I think inevitably will follow. Hermione may have created a monster and I'm not sure she would be willing to give up the upper hand in the bedroom. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next. Well done and congrats again girlie!!!!
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