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Reviews for Family Matters

By : 6phoenix6flame6
  • From ANON - sweetcreme on January 17, 2015
    I really like this story so far and hope for another chapter. Very uplifting from the other stories I have read, more mugglish :)
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  • From ANON - staar on December 02, 2014
    So good hope there is more coming !!!!!!!!!
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  • From Jan on October 01, 2012
    LOVE IT! Please update chapter 7 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - bcjink on September 30, 2012
    AAh! So excited you updated, and yes I enjoyed the chapter, even though it was short. I'm just glad you're back! ;) You did a good job, only a few spelling errors. I look forward to the next.
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  • From bloodshound on September 30, 2012
    quite a few typos in here. i count at least five. unbated yeah? They have a point though. there's nothing shameful about nightmares after trauma. In fact, it'd be more worrying if they didn't have nightmares.
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  • From AmberEyedWolf on June 18, 2012
    Just saying that I'm really enjoying this story, please update soon
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  • From ANON - Neela of Rogue on March 24, 2012
    I like this premise very much. I enjoyed the 5 chapters that you have posted so far. I hope that you will continue this story, please.
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  • From AmityVerity on February 05, 2012
    i like it. can't wait to see more.
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  • From hellangelhellina on September 21, 2011
    i like it and how you put draco in there. i can not wait to see how sirius react to regulus.
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  • From ANON - Maya on September 19, 2011
    Hello!
    Now, you said on your first chapter that criticism was welcome. I hope this statement stands true. Please know, I would not have read this far if I didn't enjoy the story. My one concern is that you are falling into the 'wish fulfillment' pit. Your Kabel is simply too perfect. He has a master's degree at 19, he has an ass that can turn a straight man gay, he has a talent that is believed to be more impressive than parseltongue (even if falsely)... please be aware. Characters that are too perfect are not only boring, but annoying. So far its ok... but please be careful of the pit.
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  • From bloodshound on September 19, 2011
    well, i'm glad that mess is out of the way. A very, like you said, change of scene chappie. How the hells bells did Draco end up in Yankiland on a ranch? If nothing else, it seems to have knocked a lot of the arrogant out of him.
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  • From ANON - mjd on June 06, 2011
    I think the thing that bothers me in this chapter was the panther cubs injuries, you say the cub has injuries but then they go to purchase robes with the thing still injured? Not very good if this cub is suppose to be Harry's familiar.
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  • From dominique1 on June 06, 2011
    yeah getting ginny out of the way happy dance and james having sex with ricki but i want to know who destroyed their relationship
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  • From dominique1 on June 06, 2011
    i love this story but i hope that harry gets with viktor krum or marcus flint or andrian purcey no bliase or draco kind of sick of them and no ginny or herimone love it want more and harry needs to tell about his life with his aunt
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  • From bloodshound on June 06, 2011
    It really was pretty daft of Mio not to stop Ginny.
    soooo, they'll be spending the rest of the summer in yanky land?
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