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By : JanisJ
  • From bloodshound on April 25, 2013
    I'm bbbbbbbbbbbaaaaack. yays for working internet. yays i say.
    anywho. nice to see this still going strong. wow, one bad choice as a kid sure got malfoy sr shafted hard core. still, it's good to see jr fitting in. he's had it rough. ouch on using the RoR though. i'm surprised none of them had nightmares.
    combined house is off to a good start and i hope they can keep it up. everything about their sitch is unusual.
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  • From Kimmimaru on March 26, 2013
    Woohoo! :D This has made me extremely happy! I am still adoring this story, you have completely summed up my personal views of Draco Malfoy it's a little scary. Lol. And having Ron and Draco bond over chess was simply genius. I am also fascinated by the way you've merged the houses...it has inspired me to perhaps do a kind of marauder's version (If you don't mind that is, it is after all, your idea. And I would credit you and this story for giving me the basic idea if you wish. If you want to message me I have a profile on the AFF forums under the same name) In all honesty I never thought I could like a Charlie/Harry fic so much but you have certainly broadened my horizons! :D I'm also happy you read and enjoy my fics too! Hee hee. I don't really expect any reviews on this site so you don't have to worry, lol. I can't wait to see what happens next and how you bring the story to it's conclusion, even though it will make me sad to see it finished. I'm also tempted to say: How very dare you have a life, you should do nothing but write Fanfiction...FOREVER! (In a joking manner, of course, lol) Anyways, can't wait to read more!

    Your fan,

    Kimmimaru.
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  • From ANON - A on February 18, 2013
    when are you going to update....its sooooo gooood!
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  • From Calixandria_420 on December 17, 2012
    I love this story! You are really good, the long chapters and excessive details are amazing. I enjoyed reading the story and can't wait for more!
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  • From Kimmimaru on December 17, 2012
    As usual a wonderfully written two chapters, I am sorry I missed the updates but I don't check quite as much as I should. *Looks guilty* Anyways, I LOVE that you made Malfoy grow up, I despise the hate surrounding his character, people just seem too unforgiving of childishness seeming to forget that Human Beings make stupid mistakes. I have had plenty of hate for my rendition of Malfoy and Harry in 'Equitum Solis Surgentes' in which Harry is making some monumentally stupid mistakes as he does in the books, yet panic does not make a very good breeding ground for rational thought. lol. Anyways, back to your story, I adore how everything is so real and believable, you've managed to make the characters slowly grow up without making them OCC which is refreshing. :) I am looking forward to what you have planned next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2012
    I liked it!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on December 08, 2012
    Just found this story...terrific. It is one of the more realistic as far as emotions & reactions that I have read. You are certainly a fine and imaginative writer!! I will be on the look out for the next chapter. I love your view of Harry & his relationship with beyond horrible Ginny. Crazy about how Harry is in this story and with Charlie!! I very much hope you will not break them up or let anyone get in between.
    Harry is no sleep around or friend with benefit lay. I think it would really hurt your Harry deeply if he found out Charlie wasn't 100% his.
    A little jealousy is fun though as long as it is straightened out quick. (I hate it when people hurt!) But dear author you know best...you have so far.
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  • From bloodshound on December 08, 2012
    typical ron... he just won't let it go... and i really wish he would. there's no need for that now. they all know what draco did and what he was forced to do and everyone else just wants to put it behind them.
    still, it was interesting the whole blending of the houses bit. is the first syllable the most dominant trait?
    hehe, with charlie as their house person, i wonder just how often he and har will get to er play?
    lol, it figures dragon viking guy would be a malfoy relly. speaking of which, i think both draco and cissa have serious balls for coming back and making a go of it. it takes guts to pick yourself up and strive for a better future after what they went through.
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  • From Kimmimaru on September 29, 2012
    Yay! :D Can't wait for more, as always brilliant writing!
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  • From ANON - unneeded on September 23, 2012
    you're welcome. i always try to review the ones i like... unless my compy or the site crashes and then thats so not my fault. >>

    at least har come out of it none the worse for wear and finally, FINALLY got the other guy to give over. no means no dude, seriously.

    considering he only just started exploring his sexuality when he got with charlie, it isn't a big surprise that he'd never heard of being cut... or looking at porn really. charley can't complain with the fall out though. 'manscaping'... snicker, snort. oh, i am so pinching that word for my own use. ^^

    i look forward to seeing what you come up with for hars future plans. dragon tamer is obviously a little full on for him. maybe something like a dueling instructor or a WW version of a private detective/ problem solver. Even if har doesn't choose to go back, he could do the privately.

    wow, i imagine the physical attraction to the elegant male malfoys was a serious head trip. pity their attitudes ruin the image though being on the losing side will probably have put a serious knock in their snot factor.
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  • From ANON - 917brat on September 23, 2012
    simply brillint both chapter I really love them and this amaziningly wondrful story.
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  • From ANON - unneeded on September 21, 2012
    well, owww, Charleys going to be extremely pissed. Har was doing so well and relaxing and such too. They should have picked up from their time around him that har just doesn't DO that sort of thing. I'm sure they didn't mean to pushing him into panicked escape but they need to realize no means bloody NO! I wonder what har ran in to. It sounds sort of like the magical version of an electric fence
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  • From ANON - 917brat on July 17, 2012
    why do I get the feeling that both Tracey and Ginny are going to be causing trouble later on...maybe even join together in an attempt to 'pay' Harry back?
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  • From ANON - tati1 on July 14, 2012
    This is so fucking brilliant. And I'd just like to say that THIS is precisely why I fully intend to have sex before marriage.
    I really love your characters in Hermione, Ron, Harry, Molly, and Charlie. They're brilliant and real and understandable. I'm a virgin (albeit a girl and older than Harry) with no experience and I just very much connected to Harry's confusion and embarrassment. While I've obviously discovered porn and such on my own, it's very difficult to know what is and is not acceptable when it comes to sex and everything surrounding it. I really like how matter-of-fact you've been in everyone explaining things to Harry, and I liked how you demonstrated how easy it is to sexually and emotionally abuse another person, as well as how difficult it is to obtain help when that person is your own spouse.
    I can't wait to read the rest, but wanted to tell you how much I've enjoyed this fic so far. And Charlie is amazing. Wish I could find someone like him. All I've gotten so far are people who want to go WAY too fast.
    At any rate, thanks for the fic. I can't wait to see if you finished it yet or not!
    --tati1
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  • From bloodshound on July 04, 2012
    heh, poor harry. that lot seem pretty overwhelming at the best of times and considering how shy Har is... I'm surprised charlie didn't think of that.
    Still, claim well and truly staked so they should be left alone now hopefully.

    Dear, dear tracey... I do hope har loses no sleep over that one.
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