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Reviews for WONKY CROSS

By : JanisJ
  • From ANON - 917brat on July 02, 2012
    this is brillint i love how harry while still a bit inconfident and unsure about things in gaining his confidence back your doing a brillint job on this story.
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  • From Kimmimaru on June 27, 2012
    Loving what i've read of this so far, I adore your work! :D Just a little FYI; The animals their patronus' take are actually derived from Totom Animals. The Stag, for example, represents Male virility and sexuality and pride, the dog is (Obviously) loyalty. The bear however is usually a Female totom as it represents the Mother and the feirce protectiveness of a mother for her children, I would have imagined that to be Mrs. Weasley's in all honesty...but meh, I can see why you made the connection between Charlie and the bear which was kind of sweet. :) I am a little dissapointed that Harry's Patronus changed although I understand why you did it, It's mainly because I liked the connection to his dead father and the childish need for that. Anyways, I shall continue to read, looking forward to what you have planned. (Also, I LOVE your Charlie, he's absolutely perfect! I am in envy of how canon your depictions are!)
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  • From ANON - oOMissGOo on June 26, 2012

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  • From Akkochan on June 25, 2012
    This chapter was awesome:) way to go molly^^
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  • From Flare on June 25, 2012
    did you make changes in chapter 19 or did somthing else happen? Anyway I still really love this chapter and I think you hit Ginny spot on at least for your story. Will she try to curse Harry for revenge? attepmt to slip him a potion? Hell tyr to turn him to a girl or some other crazy idea of making him suffer like she feels she has or somthing? Man love this so please keep it up.
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  • From Janna on May 29, 2012
    Yay! Yay! The witch is gone. Yay! The *itch is gone. Yay! Yay! I am glad that Molly and everyone are happy for Harry and Charlie. Thank you for updating. I can't wait until the story continues, so please update again when you have time.
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  • From bloodshound on May 28, 2012
    Gah! what a CHILD and a total brat at that. how does her gf STAND her. seriously. snickers. waiting tables is all that cheating pair are worth. lets see how they cope on their own. *beams with my own sh#t eating grin.
    but Char and har, oh damn, they're adorable. I'm looking forward to the next chappie.
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  • From ANON - 917brat on May 28, 2012
    I so love this and I have to say I like how you had ginny it seemed just that much more realy to me I also can't wait to see whats going to happen and am so happy that you have update so fast please keep up the wonderful work cause this is a seriously brillint story that has me hooked. It is also the story that as got me loving the pairing Cw/Hp and looking for more, as well as attempting to write my own though it's not up yet. I guess what I am trying to say is your story is the insperation of one of my own story. so please keep up the outstanding work you are doing.
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  • From bloodshound on May 20, 2012
    good grief. it's a good thing charlies easy going. this mayhem would be enough to try anyone's nerves.
    oh yes, i too am definitely most interested in hear what little gin gin has to say.
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  • From Flare on May 20, 2012
    Ih man this is really really brillint and I can't wait to see Ginny reaction. IS it going to be furious, blmae him for her no being able to try out? tell him that Harry turn her family against her? say she knew that he would come crawling back to her? Will she try to drug him? forse him back to her? or will she go down a different rout will she know she was wrong...some how I doubt that will be the case seeing how she had acted before...or if it is I don't feel it would be a hundred precent truthful......man I am seriously curious as to what you are going to do next and I really love everything you have had happened so far so please please please keep this up and update it again real soon cause this is truly an amazing, wonderful and attentin cathcin story that has me hundred precent hooked to it and on the edge of my seat begging for more.
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  • From Sablesilverrain on April 17, 2012
    LMAO! My apartment complex's maintenance man came in while I was reading this and he must have thought I was nuts. I have four things needing repairs or replacement, but all I wanted was for him to finish looking at my heaters and garbage disposal and let me finish this. Charlie and Harry are much hotter to contemplate than a leaky disposal system, so I have to admit, I was practically shoving him out the door by the end of his inspection.

    This was great, and I am so glad I finally stuck my head back out from under my rock and got back on AFF. I need to keep up with my favorite fics!


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  • From bloodshound on April 16, 2012
    Cues fan girlish squeeeeeees. Those two are so SWEET together.
    snickers, i could sooooooooooooo see luna doing that. pervy thing. XD
    poor minnie, upstaged by the underdressed. Well, if it was an open secret before, it's now a VERY open secret. mwahahaha. Well, that's one way to distract from doom and gloom. >>
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  • From moodysavage on April 15, 2012
    I loved the betting pool idea! That was hilarious. I especially liked Luna and how she used the ghosts to catch them... very clever. Second fav has to be Hermione catching them :)
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  • From CodyMThomas on April 15, 2012
    I have come to the conclusion that Luna and I are either soul mates, or we share a brain, because I would have done the exact same thing. ^_^ yay for updates and I eagerly look forward to the next one!
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  • From Sarah_Bear on April 06, 2012
    Yup, definitely loving this. I like how it could almost end here with them so happy and in love! The patronus thing was brilliant too! And my last bit of praise ... a legthy, dodgy comment I must make: your portrayal of anal sex was spot on! I especially imagine how it feels for men who have never been penetrated before. A lot of writers who write stories like this have never experienced it themselves, or are serverly misinformed by other people's writings (who usually have never done it and also been misinformed) lol. And when they jump into a story and try to describe it, yeah it's usually hot and fairly well written, but not very realistic. So regardless of your personal experiences; I must applaud you until my hands go bloody, and my non-existent bollocks fall off
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