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Reviews for Root of Desire

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  • From axblack712 on October 28, 2011
    Love this story! Was reading it at ffnet then saw it go down to two chapters over there. Got all worried haha until I read you decided to move it over to here! Which think was smart of you :) Anyway, it's amazing how you manage to keep Tom as canon as possible while taking into consideration he's still a young 11-12 year old boy. He's new to the wizarding world and seems a bit more impressionable (not sure if that's the word I'm looking for hehe) at that age which is perfectly normal. Makes him more emotional maybe and able to become so attached to Hermione, something which would've been harder had he been in is later Hogwarts years. And yet, your Tom is still very much IC and still has that darker streak we all love in him! So, just trying to say, I really love how you're portraying young Tom Riddle :)
    Can't wait to read the newest chapter(since I read up to chapter 9 on ffnet) but in the meantime I'll enjoy reading it all over again! :D
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  • From AlasseaM on October 28, 2011
    That was the darker side to Tom.
    I really feel bad for him
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  • From ANON - Chantel on October 28, 2011
    I have to say, I really love this fanfiction. I don't do many reviews unless I plan to want more, and I must say, I really love it. It's brilliant. I would love for Tom to actually end up having a romantic relationship with Hermione. How far do you plan on taking this story? Through each year of Hogwarts? Hermione is slightly out of character, but it fits. After all, who doesn't do a little character bending to get them where we want them in a story?
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  • From greenholstein on October 28, 2011
    Well, I heard that you're moving the story to this website and decided that I should check things out. The quotes at the beginning of the chapters are no longer there T__T!! Too bad, because I think they really enhance the overall feelings in each chapter.

    Anyhow, no matter what you do, you're not gonna get rid of me that easily. I intent to follow this fic to the last chapter, so you'd better prepare to endure my rambling for the next few years :) Wish you the best of lucks and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ChaosLady on October 27, 2011
    I wonder how Tom is going to get revenge on Johnny? I can't wait!
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  • From AlasseaM on October 27, 2011
    Good as always! :D I love it... right now I just can't wait till chapter 10. cuz that's where the NEW chapters begin :D
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  • From ChaosLady on October 26, 2011
    Interesting, how Tom seems to be falling in love but views Hermione as on object to be owned. Skirting the line between light and dark.
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  • From Shamonti on October 25, 2011
    Love the chapter, can't wait for more. :)
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  • From Shamonti on October 25, 2011
    love it!
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  • From AlasseaM on October 25, 2011
    I remember I had the same reaction at that age to people snogging. It was the most gross thing I'd ever seen xD
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  • From AlasseaM on October 25, 2011
    Aww, Tommy don't like to be touched. Poor kiddo.
    I know how that feels. I feel that way too many times :(
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  • From ANON - Tiger on October 25, 2011
    Glade to see you updated and that you are continuing on with the story. Looking forward to seeing more.
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  • From Shamonti on October 24, 2011
    I hope you update the other chapters soon. :)
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  • From Shamonti on October 24, 2011
    Always loved the first chapter.
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  • From ChaosLady on October 23, 2011
    Interesting. Keep going!
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