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Reviews for Root of Desire

By : MegiiOfMysteriOusStranger
  • From ANON - Sara Beatriz on October 23, 2011
    Hello, my name is Sara and I'm portuguese, sorry if you dont understand something -.- I just want to say that your fanfic is very good, I love fanfics whith Hermione and Tom and you bring a new perspective. I read the fanfic in facfiction.net and I just love it. Please continue because is very good. Thank you :)
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  • From AlasseaM on October 23, 2011
    Aww, that's just cute! :) I keep thinking of Harry here. The word "home" is def. a trigger
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  • From ANON - dogdays on October 23, 2011
    Love it! Amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tiger on October 23, 2011
    I really love you story. Such a fresh and energizing beginning. I was so sad not to see more chapters when I got to the end, so I guess I have to say I look forward to seeing you continue this story.
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  • From AlasseaM on October 23, 2011
    HAHAHA! Sorry, it's just... I only came to AFF to see if one of the Tomione fics I read were updated before starting to read a fan fiction at FF.Net... The funny thing is, I was about to read yours on FF.Net. Discovering it at AFF is so much better :D
    It's a good start. I like how he was so enchanted by Diagon-Alley. I love how Tom kept being astounded by how Hermione treated him, and how he was about to steal the book, but thought of Dumbles. All in all, I can see you are trying to make him as IC as possible. (but please, don't end up with Fluffy!Tom)
    But... and there it is, the annoying "but", even though I know how mature Tom was even at that age, it is still too mature for him to want to have her someday, at least at that age. I would think that maybe when the hormones really begin to rage, that he would think like that.
    Right now, I could imagine, he didn't want her to spend time with anyone but him, because she is the only one who has been this nice, and he wouldn't want to lose her.

    Oh, yeah, I forgot I hand cookies to people who please me (LOL), so here's a cookie!

    **This part of the review posted AFTER finding out you also wrote Ivory Tower.***
    Talking about the OoC'ness of Hermione. Don't think about it. I read the Ivory Tower, as you may have noticed by the three reviews I've made to that one here, and I don't see much OoC in it, which shows that you are very much able to do the IC, and isn't that enough? You have proven yourself to be an excellent writer, and I hope to see the same excellence here (But you are still bad for making my Lord die!!! xD)
    Great fic, and I hope you update soon, pretty please! :D
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  • From ANON - Meg on October 22, 2011
    I'm really enjoying this so far. Please update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - auntbecky on October 22, 2011
    My question is what is the big deal of someone being OoC? Isn't that the purpose of fanfic, to play around with the characters and make them do what you want?
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