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Reviews for The Defining Prophecy

By : Landquist
  • From DB1 on May 19, 2012
    Amazing story. Please update soon!!

    DB
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  • From Gabby0515 on April 09, 2012
    Glad that she ended up with Voldemort. I like a dark Hermione :D Can't wait for your next update!
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  • From LadyAngelEuropas on April 05, 2012
    I love reading this story and i can't wait for more
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  • From sarahdaye9 on March 29, 2012
    Woah- sucks to be Hermione right now. Can't believe that Voldie is the better choice here, even though I enjoy stories with him, in the interest of her health she better try to stay with Harry!
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  • From LadyAngelEuropas on March 27, 2012
    AH! cliffhanger...please update again soon
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  • From AlasseaM on February 08, 2012
    Lol, you're welcome
    Rumors, hmm? xD GO MIONE. Funny enough, if I was on Hermione's situation I would find myself a new place (through the secret passage ways ofc) and constantly move. I would be helping neither... then again... maybe not. I'm forever with the DL xD
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  • From Gabby0515 on February 06, 2012
    Wanted to say I'm really liking this story so far. Can't wait for an update.
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  • From AlasseaM on February 02, 2012
    1. He was too kind. Wonder what's going on.
    2. Hermione just blackmailed Malfoy. What has the world come to?

    LOL
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  • From AlasseaM on February 01, 2012
    Nothing really happened. But Hermione missing the Dark Lord was interesting.
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  • From AlasseaM on January 18, 2012
    That's my Lord!!! :D

    And, eeewwwww! I don't like Harry like that, and the thought of her having sex with him is actually more disgusting than Ron!! *cleaning brain with LOADS of soap*
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  • From Bookworm21 on January 18, 2012
    Definitely a very good fic that i absolutely love !! I cant wait to see what will happen next !! A question though im new to this site and was wondering if there is any way to keep track of the updates to this story ?? Till the next chapter :)
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  • From AlasseaM on January 11, 2012
    Hermione is getting better.
    When will we actually have the DL and Hermione actually together interacting with each other?
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  • From Nerys on January 09, 2012
    Finally! Le sigh. For some reason, I wasn't allowed to review again and I got really frustrated with the disappearing of everything I tried to post, or when I pressed review, I just got some blank page with nothing. But now I see a box. *keeps fingers crossed*

    I just want to thank you for your explanation. It's actually quite a relief. I'm not sure the warning was necessary if it were because of Harry playing a large role in the story. I'd just said that or left it out entirely since I personally prefer some plot in a story and it's not often you can write something substantial with only the two main characters.

    Speaking of one of the main characters, you already had Hermione undertake a bit of action by asking Snape, but I still find her acting a bit too resigning to what's happening to her. If I were you, I'd have her plot and scheme and research more when she's not in contact with either LV or HP. I understand you're going for her being overwhelmed by them due to that connection when she's with them, so personality changes then are suitably explained, but Hermione's a very sneaky person. She finds ways around things. Considering her intelligence, it stands to reason she should be able to, at least, outsmart Harry and get some time away from him (glamours; stunning spells; potions; invisibility charms; whatever).

    Also, Dumbledore didn't want Molly to know because it would be upsetting to her? I take it he wants to keep it a secret, but surely, others should see the changes in Harry and Hermione's behaviour and start asking questions. I'm not quite getting this line of thinking. Who is it supposed to help? LV?

    I'm guessing Harry's acting the way he is due to the Horcrux influencing him. I'm assuming in your story Voldemort realised that's what their connection is and he uses it to push Hermione away from Harry by having him act this way and taking over in those moments? I recall you add a glimmer of redness in Harry's gaze at some point. I do agree with Atlantean Diva that it feels like the change is going too fast (and with too little resistance of Harry himself) to the reader, but that can be because we don't have all the information yet. So, I'm holding my judgement off on that and see whether we get an explanation at a later moment.

    Oh ... getting some in later chapter, however, it's got one huge plothole: "Granger you put entirely to much faith in the boy, he barely attempted to stop the Dark Lord when his mind was being possessed, what makes you think he will put effort into stopping something he sees as natural emotions? You forget that he does not believe that the Dark Lord can effect him now." - The only reason Harry thinks LV can't affect him is because Dumbledore said so. So why is Dumbledore not correcting this? It's not in his interest to have Harry push Hermione away with this behaviour. And Harry would surely listen to Dumbledore telling him this.

    If you're going with Snape being on the DL side and thus not informing AD that the connection is open, it makes no sense for him to give this info to Hermione at all since she can easily relay it to Dumbledore or others who'd tell Dumbledore. Harry might be rash, but he's not stupid. Hermione herself might not be able to convince him but Dumbledore should be.

    "I was not promising that Voldemort would triumph against Harry at the end of the story because of the power Hermione would give him." - Oh noes, another one of those A/Ns that you never see in Snapiones, Luciones or Dramiones - they always triumph in the end. *teasing wink* I don't mind LV losing though (*hides in secure facility*), but you'd best not let Serp read this A/N. *wicked sniggering*

    Hmmm... I'm looking forward to read more. Loving the smut. XDDD
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  • From AlasseaM on January 05, 2012
    I'm getting rather annoyed with Harry...

    And wait, that wasn't a dream???
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  • From AlasseaM on January 04, 2012
    Yes, it was very short, but the updates are thankfully very frequent. :)
    I'm glad to hear that this is not one of those deceiving Tomiones :D
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