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By : SaitouLover
  • From djaddict on September 05, 2013
    This story continues to facinate me.

    Eagerly anticipating updates!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 05, 2013
    I like the writing style. It's smooth and easy to read/understand. However, I would add a shouta or pedo warning. Severus is constantly referring to Harry as a child or boy, even when his thoughts turn sexual. It makes it uncomfortable for me to read and enjoy it.I think other readers would feel the same if they're not expecting it. I'd also add Humil as a tag since Harry doesn't enjoy it.

    Also, I don't see Severus as really caring for Harry. He seems to focus on what will turn him on(lying to Harry to get what he wants,etc) and only soothing him after he does something bad to Harry in the first place. For example, even when he's trying to calm Harry in the bath when he's cleaning him out Severus even then ignores some of Harry's pain. He's turned on and then thinks about keeping Harry without caring about Harry's opinion on the matter. Also, he made Harry eat everything, even though he knew it would make Harry uncomfortable. After being starved it can be harmful to force someone to eat more than they can tolerate. Harry would feel ill for hours. Severus could have just made Harry eat until he was full.

    Anyway, this isn't a flame. I don't mean it as such. Sometimes it is hard to see how people will read/interpret a story, so I'm just sharing my opinion. I don't know if you mean Severus to come across as so manipulative. When I read the title and summary I figured there may be a little tough love at times(BDSM) and it is Severus after all, but I figured the focus would be on Severus taking care of Harry in a stable, affectionate way. He would make Harry's life better honestly, rather than manipulate him into thinking he's what's best for Harry. I think more of a focus on how Severus cares for Harry, rather than how he lust after him, would help with this. Also, if you ever edit this, maybe give the readers a little peak into how Severus thinks of how Harry before the punishment happens.

    Again, good writing and it seems like it could be an interesting story.

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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on September 05, 2013
    Wow! A chapter full of exposition, as if you needed to clear your head and quantify all the ideas that you had for this story. I liked it! Though I admit I was a little disappointed by the lack of Severus and Harry interaction. Having all of this information now gives me a good idea of where you're going, and I hope it makes it easier for you to update. I sincerely like this story. It's evolved so nicely since that first chapter, becoming richer and deeper, and now with this mythology you're weaving I can't wait to see what happens next. I always thought that George and Fred would be particularly adaptable to this kind of life, and Ron is still malleable enough to shape into it.
    Interesting, intriguing. Thanks for updating.
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  • From ANON - ech1964 on September 05, 2013
    Yes YES YEEEESSSSS !! Another chapter has arrived. Thank you thank you thank you. Whew! Just had to get that off my chest. Now to read, drink in, and devour these wonderous words ... and then I'll probably read from the beginning again (as I have done countless times already). Talk to you again in a bit.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 05, 2013
    Wanted more Harry/Severus but this "explanation" chapt and "review" of Arthur's family was fun. Looking forward to Arthur's
    talk with Molly, the children, especially Ron & Ginny.
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  • From chrissy on September 04, 2013
    Cool update!!!
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  • From ANON - yuiop on September 04, 2013
    Nice, glad to read another update!
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  • From ANON - Am I done on July 30, 2013
    Loved the accent. I could hear it as I read what you wrote. Great job with the phonetic pronunciation! Even if it was accidental it was really well done. The accent was hot. Especially if you imagine that low, smooth, mesmerising voice to go with it. Mmmm yum. Lol

    Hope you update again soon. The dinner was fantastic! Keep up the good work!

    Deliberate Insanity
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  • From ANON - tvturtle12 on July 28, 2013
    I absolutely love this story every time I come across I reread it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Ten on July 23, 2013
    Please Please Please write more!! I love this story!
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  • From ANON - yiuop on July 14, 2013
    Nice
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  • From Lia-Myst-Vyn on July 11, 2013
    Beginning bothered me because I didn't know Harry's age quickly enough. I love the attention he gets from Snape overall and the overall plot about the old ways!

    Can't wait to learn more about these old ways and what the others do! Also, Showdown with Weasley Senior!!
    Update soon I hope!
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  • From ANON - Kira (not my real name :P) on July 11, 2013
    I like your story very much, even if i think Snape may be bit too pushy for my taste, it sounds good in the story. I can't wayt for the juicy parts (giddy :) )
    But I'm wondering how is Hary suppose to defeat Voldemort now, if neither him nor Dumbledor can go horcrux hunting??
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  • From Snarrys_love_slave_BDSM on July 07, 2013
    I was wondering if your ever going to update this I've been waiting for months it seems. I'm so anxous to see what will happen will harry start to fall for snape and will he learn more about the old ways and learn how to control wards? What is going to happen when he gose to class and how will his "freinds" (I hate ron) will react to snape careing for harry. I do hope we see mr. Wesleay (sp) soon and put some drama between snape harry and ginny. Oh and have draco trying to go after snape a lil angish always dose a girls heart some good oh and lots of ginny bashing please? Oh and have the twins be awsome & a lil twinsest. Update soon please pretty please
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  • From dantae on June 30, 2013
    This is great so far! I can't wait to see where it's going to go.
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