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Reviews for Absolution

By : Holly
  • From ANON - neverliveindoubt on July 11, 2012
    I love this version as much as the other one but I like this in that Lupin is alive, and I love him as a father-figure. I loved Sirius, but he was not a father to Harry in the way he needed, he was more the older brother that gets into a lot of trouble with the adults. But keep writing I love your style.
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  • From ANON - Sara on July 02, 2012
    Please please please please update. I'm desperate to know what happens next!
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  • From Ash_Qualls on May 18, 2012
    So cool cant wait for more!!!!
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  • From ANON - xxRezxx on May 03, 2012
    hey i love that you got some answers in there cuase the story can't move on without them.i think ram really got out of line for a bit there. oh and about punishment i think a lot of little details are what really makes the story like what they say about the movies it is the littler details that make the movies more realistic like how they show buck beaks claw dip into the water. anyway love your stories and can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2012
    I think those small things are a part of Harry's life at the moment. His twins are the centre of his universe and if you don't write small silly things about them then it just doesn't seem realistic. I think despite what most people think, they are important and you should include them.

    However, please don't make the entire chapter about them, we have been desperately waiting for the good stuff. Make sure the story moves forward and all the small things are okay :)
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  • From bloodshound on May 01, 2012
    hmmm, that's one detail they didn't have to deal with in 'punishment' since V had already been and seen har. filler chappies are important too since they give us background and such.
    as for punishment, don't fight so hard. let it flow and if it's filling up with little side points, let it. get to the end of the chappie and if your not happy, then you can trim as you need. Myself, i don't mind the little side points. its not like har is up for doing much more until the dom's get back. just don't forget to move the plot forward as well.
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  • From ANON - lugnut on May 01, 2012
    I absolutely LOVE this story. Punishment is good, but I couldn't handle the thought of Harry killing Remus. Please continue with this one as well! I love it!!!!
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  • From ANON - MC on April 22, 2012
    Wow! I love both of these stories you have written :) I hope to read more soon. If you're still looking I wanted to offer my services as a beta. I have not written a story of my own but I have been a beta once before of ff.net. I am also on here it there everyday so I will be accesable. Let me know if you're interested. We can talk more over email.
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  • From Bloodredrose13 on April 12, 2012
    Love it! Can't wait for an update. If possible, i think i like this one better than Punishment. :)
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  • From RaeNSesshy4Life on April 03, 2012
    i love fg/hp. very nice start. i am currently reading your story punishment. please update soon
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  • From hellangelhellina on March 28, 2012
    First you made a Maya he/she mistake in chapter 3 paragraph 38. Also in chapter 2 but forgot where. I have to say i like the way you write the story but that may be because I see them as two different storys. Any who keep up the good work.
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  • From SableScribe on March 16, 2012
    Is there a way to ad this get emailed updates?
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  • From ANON - yvettesims5621 on March 13, 2012
    I adore this fic: having Remus, Harry and Fenrir together in one setting is a definite must. Rather intrigued by what happened at the end, can't wait to find out what that is all about :)
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  • From bloodshound on March 13, 2012
    this is so much more hopeful than the other and fen won't end up driving har into catatonia while claiming him. I wonder why he gives off a sub vibe? He's not wolf or anything else right... at least not yet?
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  • From ANON - Skye on March 12, 2012
    I love the idea but the execution is making me twitchy. Something about your writing seems different and off. I think its mostly semi awkward sentence structure and that the characters are slightly one-dimensional right now
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