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Reviews for Absolution

By : Holly
  • From AlphazSlut on March 12, 2012
    I like this version better. It doesn't make me cry. xD
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 12, 2012
    Loving the new chapters! Great job! Keep going!!AFTER
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  • From hellangelhellina on March 04, 2012
    Can't wait to read how you take this view.
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  • From ANON - RRW on February 28, 2012
    Ugg...all these cliff hangers are killing me!!!!
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  • From Samibear on February 24, 2012
    Pretty good. I can't wait for fenir and harry to meet! More plz
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  • From bloodshound on February 23, 2012
    far more promising for har that the fall out of the other story. For remi too considering he was killed in the other. in this one, har won't have quite as much trauma to work through.
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  • From ANON - Chipmunk-on-Helium on February 23, 2012
    Love It! this is a great take on the story. Also I'm really glad to see Remus alive. He's one of my favorite characters in the HP series. However I did notice one thing, several times you referred to Maya as a she. Because I've read Punishment (several times to tied me over till you have a chance to update it again) I know he is supposed to be male yet you call him a she when the Fenir tells the rest of the alphas to tell Maya about Harry and Remus. Then again when Maya first gets a look at Harry. I figure you probably just missed it or spell check did something funny but it does make things confusing. But still I LOVE both Absolution and Punishment and cant wait for updates for both. I think you have a great thing going here and cant wait to see where to take both stories!
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  • From Spaz666 on February 22, 2012
    I've noticed this in both your fics; when you refer to Maya, the healer, you switch between genders in pronoun use. This is the only one you do this with. I know Maya is a submissive but is Maya male or Female?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2012
    Just read Punishment and then found this. Gotta say I like Punishment but I truly enjoy the portrayal of werewolves with culture and codes. I prefer Absolution to Punishment only because I would enjoy Remus interacting with the pack. Is he a sub or just not a very dominant dom? Will the clause in Punishment be true in Absolution as well with Remus being poisoned with Wolfsbane? Harry will be much nore coherent in Absolution I think. And Remus could give a better accounting to his Alpha about the situation. Will everyone still be dead as well? It would be int eresting to see if this will be a true alternate accounting or a spinoff of Punishment. Although perhaps Remus wasnt as far gone, since he didnt have as much wolfsbane that was sub par? Thank you for posting. :)
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 14, 2012
    ooo I like this! Intriguing to see what would have happened if Remus had lived. Keep going!!
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  • From NAnderson on February 13, 2012
    Ah I have been looking forward to this! :) And I now feel the need to go reread chapter 14 and figure out what the light is dammit :P lol.
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  • From RRW on February 11, 2012
    Oh I do hope you continue this story...absolutely FANTASTIC!
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  • From TurtleGirl52 on February 10, 2012
    Love the AU spin off from Punishment! It is so great to see Moony - hopefully both he and Harry will make it to the pack. Can't wait to see where you go with this (personally I am hoping to see Moony playing the overprotective parent when Fen tries to court Harry)!
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  • From ANON - amber on February 10, 2012
    love it so far hope you add more soon
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  • From ANON - spaceladyn on February 10, 2012
    I absolutly love ur stories. Keep writing please
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