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Reviews for Debt Relief, Malfoy Style

By : tbird1965
  • From Hermione_Black on June 22, 2012
    My, I was just checking how many more chapters you had up. 20! I'm only barely over the first half of the story! That is really worth looking forward to, there is some (a lot) OOC'ness (mobile phones, tvs and computers I can handle, but the Facebook page seems a bit overdoing it) but overall I'm greatly enjoying this. Ginny and Hermione are very lucky indeed.
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  • From Hermione_Black on June 22, 2012
    My my, Ginny sure is a lucky gal ;-)
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  • From Hermione_Black on June 22, 2012
    You might want to add that the story is (slightly) AU/OOC but that never harmed anyone ;-) On to read more!
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  • From Hermione_Black on June 22, 2012
    Enjoying the story so far! You have a great way of building up tension (literally..). They are a rather unlikely couple, but you manage to make them work well.
    And I've never been on a motorbike before, but if that's what it feels like... I guess I should try that out soon, lol.
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  • From piksi on June 21, 2012
    This is sexy! I would do ANYTHING to have Lucius as my personal slave. >
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  • From piksi on June 21, 2012
    "Can I please come home from work and find Lucius Malfoy naked and sleeping in MY bed. Please. I promise I'll never ask for anything else as long as I live" I couldn't agree more. He is gorgeous and you make him so sexy in this story. Love it!
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  • From piksi on June 21, 2012
    I found this story last week and I couldn't stop reading it! This is amazing, normally I don't read Lucius/Ginny pairing but this one is fantastic.
    You did a very great job! They both are perfect and sexy together.
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  • From BellaNoir23 on June 18, 2012
    First I have to say thanks for writing this I love and it but you totaly got me in trouble lol I sat and read all 23 chapters today while i was supposed to be working. Anyhoo Its awesome and I cant wait for your next posting!!!!
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  • From Bajagirl on June 18, 2012
    I am in love with this story! I get so excited to see updates and I love that you are updating it 5 chapters at a time!! I have to admit that I have read most of the updates at least 2x before you post more! I can't wait to see where the story goes!
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  • From Sera21 on June 18, 2012
    Okay I made it to chapter 11 but I can read no further. Lucius is sooooooooo out of character, you have turned him into everything he wasn't in the books. I realize some character development is in order but to have him eating at muggle establishments, doing muggle bussiness, going to muggle touristy places, happily using teh technology is all to much. Lucius Malfoy despizes muggles and muggle borns. After he touched one he would probably wipe his hand on a little pocket cloth. This story had a lot of potential. You could have them visit a wizardy tourist place that you make up or...you could even visit a muggle tourist place BUT it turns out something magic happened there and its actually a wizard touristy place too. You could have made somebody that got held in teh tower a famous wizard with a cool back story...you could have had them communicating with 2 way mirrors or with some wizard made technology that you invented. Maybe a age old magical wooden trinket box that instantly sends the messages inside or something but this story is so full of things that simply do not fit with these characters and their knowledge of the muggle world that it is just too frustrating to read...
    it reads like you are trying for a modern harlequin/ mills and boon romance.The rich, handsome tycoon with a dark past and a troubled heart and the innocent but fiesty red-head who fights against her better judgement and finds herself falling in love despite their differences.--___-- At least he doesn't have his own bloody helicopter/yacht is all I can say.or maybe thats still coming...
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  • From Sera21 on June 18, 2012
    "me Tarzan, you Jane" Another muggle reference that neither Ginny nor Lucius should have been familiar with --___--
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  • From Sera21 on June 18, 2012
    Wait..did Lucius Malfoy just call muggles 'clever'?? WHAT? WHAT? Did he just switch personalitys? Also, it would have been a nice touch if you had decribed the place they went in Germany a bit more...I have travelled there a bit myself and saying a resturant is german and with a view of the Rhine could be any one of about 10 major cities and 15-20 towns. The resturants in the north of germany are really different to those in the South, the South placing more emphasis on traditional cuisine like what you mentioned...
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  • From Sera21 on June 18, 2012
    wait...why does Ginny, who is a pureblood in every way, have a faverite book that is a muggle childrens book? Couldn't you have come up with a wizarding equivalent? Dunno, The little chimera that could? Goodnight Moony? Beauty and the Werewolf? I mean come on! Its seriously not that hard to do a word play :P.lol But yeah, the rest of it is looking good :) more smexy action plz!
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  • From Sera21 on June 18, 2012
    waaaaaaaait, I'm pretty sure there is something in one of the books about muggle technology not working around magic....?? Also Its kind of annoying/unrealistic how suddenly the malfoys, who spent 7 books being reightous assholes and hating on everything even a little bit muggle , are using absolute shit-loads of muggle technology. I mean really? Not even the slightest hesitation? and why does Draco even care about knowing a phones name ? If you had asked me 10 minutes after buying my new phone what make it was the best I could hazard was Motorolla because knowing the brand of my phone is simply incredibly unimportant to me and I don't see how it would suddenly be important to Draco who grew up without even knowing what a phone is. I also feel you could have added in a bit of amazement at teh technology like the TV. I mean they have NEVER seen something like this before now...why are they not more suspicious or warry?
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on June 17, 2012
    Damn Draco has HORRIBLE timing.
    That dinner party should have lasted longer!
    But I can't wait to read what you have in store next.
    I really can't wait to hear how the double date goes and what Severus has to say.
    Well post more when you can (hopefully soooooooon)
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