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By : evil-minded
  • From bloodshound on August 24, 2012
    is it just me or does Min's care of her lions seem a bit slip shod.

    We know Sev has patience... he wouldn't be able to brew if he didn't.

    i look forward to seeing what hell is going to drop on ickle Ronnikins. Even more so if Molly and the twins learn of his behavior. Not acceptable in any way, size, shape or form.

    I wish sev good luck with his Lion cub taming. It'll be twice as hard since his cub comes to him so badly damaged and mishandled. Gaining his trust would be the most important step and i think Sev is well on the way to doing that.

    something also tells me that the Dursleys have some serious karma owing and sev just might be the one to nudge it on it's way. I lay bets that har is never going back there again.

    I'm glad Sev has excused har from classes too. It's not like har would have been in any fit state to absorb knowledge anyway. I'm honestly surprised he's done as well as he has. This will also give Sev and har a chance to bond and lay a stable base for the relationship.
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  • From jujukitty on August 24, 2012
    lol poor minerva, that scene was so well done! and poor snape's patience has got to be wearing thin, but at least he has ron to take it out on now. another great chapter :)
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  • From JeanMcIory on August 23, 2012
    yes, I too say that this relationship has to be, because Snape and Harry are doing so well together, especially if you are the author throwing them together
    I see you started answering reviews in your chapters :D
    thanks for sharing this with us

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  • From JeanMcIory on August 23, 2012
    what a git Ron is, but I've known this already
    love this fic still
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  • From SteveSettler on August 23, 2012
    somehow I never know if I should laugh at this chapter or if I should be sad because of it. There are definitely funny parts in it but generally, it's sad that Ron is such a git. I just hope that he will re-think some things

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  • From SteveSettler on August 23, 2012
    and again the reviewing didn't work, *sigh*
    well, I was just telling you that I love how protective and how posessive Severus is over Harry and that I love the way he is taking his education into his hands
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  • From ANON - woodland spirit on August 19, 2012
    love the story! update soon!
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  • From moodysavage on August 19, 2012
    Possessive and protective... two of my favorite words.

    Oh and about wondering if Snape was his dad... I was like 'did I say that? what was I thinking?'

    That was at the beginning when you had mentioned Lily... and I know that would have messed things up because then the story couldn't have went anywhere which would have been awful! lol

    I like that Snape can sense Harry and knew that something was wrong with him when he was being beaten up by Ron but I wonder if Snape realizes that he's going to have to watch those warnings very closely. He left Harry alone because he got the feeling from Harry that it wasn't too serious... but what Harry considers 'not serious' is NOT what most people would consider not serious. Harry needed help but he's so used to being treated that way and worse that it did not send the right message to Snape. Severus will have to watch for all warnings.
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  • From ANON - Quinn on August 18, 2012
    So. Snape has gotten his information on a few new facts.
    And he was pretty fast in revealing who was the one to hurt Ron.

    Not really surprising, seeing as
    1) Harry is not as supply as he wants and
    b) Snape has seen Harrys memories.

    Anyway. The story is good
    I am waiting to see what will come next

    Quinn
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 18, 2012
    I really like your story! And I love how your taking your time with it because you really are explaining BDSM the way it needs to be explained to a beginner and it does make the story more realistic because most people do see that and think well I just don't get it. That sounds gross and wrong. But like I tell a lot of people it doesn't take a lot of trust to have someone give you pleasure it does take a lot of trust to allow them to give you pain even in a safe and controlled environment. I'm also one of the last people that should be giving grammer critism but watch your tenses. You made a lot of words into action verbs (ing) when they shouldn't have been.
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  • From bloodshound on August 17, 2012
    Kudos is positive acknowledgement or being to your credit.
    I'm glad Sev has patience cause he's going to need it dealing with har. Har has a LOT of damage, both physical and mental, that he needs help and guidance with sorting. Most of he doesn't even realize he's carrying since he's known no other way of life. I hope Sev does go to the other two cause i can't see Ron stopping. Har would be much safer and I think, far more stable in closer contact with his dom. It would also give him more opportunity to learn to trust snape.
    at any rate, the dursleys have serious karma owing.
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  • From Markhal on August 17, 2012
    I so love seeing Severus going into a protective mood... Harry is far from total recovery but step by step, Severus is helping and fixing him. Now I am just waiting for the Potion Master's revenge on a certain stupid and bigoted redhead... I was so angry with him in the last chapter I hope he will pay!
    Thank you for your answer to my last review and thank you for the update!
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  • From D_Akisira_RTMS on August 15, 2012
    severus would be pissed when he finds out!!!! wait won't the necklace thing notify severus about what happen???
    this is an interesting story! please update soon. i like the way how you are slowly developing the relationship (with harry's fear and stuff).
    is there a way for me to know when you update this story if so may you please tell me?
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  • From Kayrox133 on August 12, 2012
    Regarding chapter 7 Ron is such an idiot. I have a feeling the wrath of Severus Snape and the other Slytherins will be out for a major retribution. Ron is such a jerk. I would live to see Molly in a rage at Ron over this. After all she is from a pure blood family as is Arthur. Until the next chapter.... Loving the story so far.
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  • From ANON - Quinn on August 12, 2012
    I see the last chapter ends with bashing

    Please don't add Dumbeldore to the bashing.
    I like Dumbeldore, and see him as a maybe old man with his faults and all, but in my opinion he cares for Harry deeply. Please consider if you can give him a "good" part in this story. Maybe he can be the one that says that Harrys decision is not disturbing and all... And he can be the one who brings new facts to Snapes atention? Something like this, please?

    Other than that, the story has a good rythmus (not too fast, not too slow)
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