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By : vinsmouse
  • From Jan on September 09, 2012
    Please update chapter 17 soon.
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  • From ChaosLady on September 08, 2012
    Three more chapters in a row, yay!
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  • From bloodshound on September 08, 2012
    beams, this har is no dumble pawn indeed.
    dumbles really has no on but himself to blame. this har is trained, proud, confident and has family backing him. Dumbles has no chance. It will be interesting to see how he manages with a har that won't be his tool.
    malfoy sr is going to be pissed as well. this changes the entire dynamic. I hope har stays friends with ms bones and nev. I'm also sure Draco will take to logical thinking like a duck to water.
    dumbles is going to have to be doing a lot of back tracking and re grouping if he ever hopes to make use of har.
    I hope har still becomes friends with the twins though... they're fun. ^^
    you write a welll crafted and entertaining story.
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  • From ladilyndi on September 08, 2012
    I am enjoying this story so very much. Thank you for your faithfulness. I look forward to more installments.
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  • From ChaosLady on September 07, 2012
    Oh wow. Three chapters in a row! Excellent chapters.
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  • From bloodshound on September 07, 2012
    lol. tea with the grangers. its all so very British. ^^
    Nicely done Arabella. This Har is going to be NO dumble pawn. dumbles can't even blame her since she did indeed do her duty. it's not her fault if he didn't read it.
    a wizard and a witch trained in logic... things are going to be very, VERY different from cannon and for the better. I'm not sure the WW will survive. ^^
    at least Har's accidental magic was useful this time. He saved someones life. I'm guessing Life Debts don't count when the recipient is a squib?
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  • From ANON - HarveysGirl on September 07, 2012
    This is so sweet. I had never heard of Biggles before so I looked it up on google. This is a really unique crossover. It is heartwarming and logical. It's a great read.
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  • From ChaosLady on September 06, 2012
    Four chapter in a row! Yay! I'm glad he's meeting Hermione early. A wonderfully long update!
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  • From bloodshound on September 06, 2012
    wow, you update super fast.
    I've always thought the dursleys were fecking stupid... i mean think about it. the kid has magic and is going to grow up to be a wizard yeah? They're already in the know so what's to stop him from hexing the absolute hell out of them when he comes of age.
    If they'd been thinking worth a lick they'd have used him as a tool to make their lives easier beyond making him do housework.

    tch, dumbles sure is careless with his pawns. har got nicked and he doesn't even know. His own fault really. I also hope the dursleys have something Karma esque happen to them. when har is free and clear they ought to be sued for child abuse.

    I gotta say, i got nothing but respect for Ginger and Madam Bones, Gingers housemates too. I imagine having har de horcruxed is going to put a serious crimp in dumbles plans.

    Oh har is just going LOVE his first broom ride. He already has a love of flying.

    Meeting Mio huh... can you say foreshadowing. Still, I'm glad they've got each other and have met before Dumbles has had a chance to influence her.

    I can't wait to see if har goes to hogwarts or somewhere else. pls keep the chappies coming. this is great.
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  • From ANON - whitebuffalowmn on September 06, 2012
    good story!! please keep the chapters coming!

    Please update soon

    thank you

    Carol
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  • From LadyFreak on September 06, 2012
    And enter Hermione. Very sweet story. Please continue. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going. Though Harry's hero worship is sort of worrying since that is what Dumbledore normally wants anyway. I understand the desire behind it though. Keep writing!! **hands cookies and hot chocolate to the muse**
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  • From ChaosLady on September 05, 2012
    So Dumbledore won't have a clue? Good. I liked it.
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  • From LadyFreak on September 05, 2012
    interesting tale. very much looking forward to reading more. please update soon. :)
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  • From ChaosLady on September 04, 2012
    I'm not familiar with the Biggles but this is so good, I don't care. I can't wait til the next update!
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  • From bloodshound on September 04, 2012
    nice cover up for the quartets ages... did rose know he was of a squib line?
    i think har is going to come out of this a very sensible young man.
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