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Reviews for The Tribulation of the Blue Moon

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Kati on November 08, 2013
    The most interesting fick with this paring i read in a looooooooooong time. Just delicious.
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on October 21, 2013
    Ah, what I mean with his mates don't work is that his pack mates don't have jobs that they have to go to :)
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on October 21, 2013
    Hey, really enjoyed this one. Like how you had Fenrir transforming slowly and the way you portrayed the different layers of grey that a persona can have. Wasn't a fan of the Bad! Moody and Tonks chapter. I always like both of them and to have them ripped limb from limb for doing what they thought best is a bit much. Yes, they shouldn't have been rough with Harry but death? Really? and Harrys reaction wasn't even that shocked . More like "eh...moving on" but I guess that fits with his new personality(?) I certainly enjoyed this fic more then the Dracken one you a writing and I appreciated the fact that years later at 21 Harry (only)has 6 children, compared to teh Dracken fic in which he is what 25...and he has 18 children( according to the latest scaled bits which I browsed through). GOOD GRIEF, I honestly don't know anybody, woman, man or anything in between that would want to have 18 children by the time they are in their mid twentys. I'm 26 myself and I just really couldn't identify with that bit( I mean all the babies) which is why I stopped reading. I feel like this fic also really covered more of the annoying bits about having children instead of just glossing over them, how they are always getting into everything and the fact that they are always THERE.Unlike the Harry of "drackens" who in my own opinion (after birthing 6 children by the tender age of 17 ) is more of a glorified baby machine, the Harry here is more animal, he exists largely like a wolf with Fenrir and the Pack which is another reason I don't feel annoyance at the large amount of babies. He is following his natural urge after all and living apart from everything else and CHOOSING to stay there seems so different from being forced to go through heat after heat, carrying baby after baby in a shear endless cycle.Plus his mates actually don't work . They hunt but I feel like this Harry somehow has more freedom. I was wondering if the kids were going to go to Hogwarts though? Who teaches them to read and such or is that not important?
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  • From ANON - Celestit on October 20, 2013
    Thank you so much for this really great story!
    I did enjoy each and every chapter.
    You really have a great writing style, the characters have deep and everything just fit.
    So once again:
    Thank you really much for the many great hours of reading you did present us with!

    Celestit
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  • From NinaSweets on October 20, 2013
    So amazing! I love a happy ending. A beautiful story with the right amount of angst and suspense and fluff. Absoloutely love this pairing and I'm glad you did them justice :D
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  • From ANON - Emma on October 20, 2013
    Omg loved it!!!!! I was so sad when all my fav characters died but I'm glad that Harry is finally happy! :) hopefully, there will be updates soon since hArry has yet to have a girl. ;) maybe she should be named Stacy? :) anyway, thanks again!!!!
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  • From ANON - Me on October 20, 2013
    It was good Kinda Sad its over but loved it all the more for it
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  • From TATIS on October 19, 2013
    I love that.
    I loved the whole fic.
    I would love to know if Harry will have more babies.
    I love children.
    There are few more puppies happier I am.

    I really congratulate you.
    You write great

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  • From ANON - Nene on October 18, 2013
    I Love this story so much. I would love to see Sirius play with the five pups, only at their parents ok first.
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  • From ANON - ChrisVags on October 16, 2013
    To Starlight Massacre,

    I want to say I
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  • From ANON - AC7 on October 15, 2013
    Ok this is my first review on this site, so hopefully it works, cos I'm not a member.
    But OMG, where did all these new chapters appear? Spent half the night catching up, lol. But yeah you could say It was a monster of a chapter, but the whole story is a monster, at first I wasn't sure of the pairing but as I read further into the story, fell in love with them. This story as it's ups and downs, it made me laugh and cry and angry, but I was so glad when Voldemort died and Harry and kids all survived, but sad that half the pack died, (well except the 3 bitches, what they did to Harry and the relationship he has with his mate). I was a bit sad coming to the end of the last chapter thinking that was the end, but you surprise me with an extra chapter, I look forward to reading that too. Sorry I haven't taken the time to review before on any of your stuff, but never know what to say, as I feel like after reading something so epic that I feel like I'm lacking in my reviews, if I just say great story. But I'll try to in future.
    I love when you post something, it always a nice surprise to see when you update, so take as long as you like, I'm not fussed on how long an author takes the write an update, but when a story goes unfinished that disappoints me, especially if it's well written and thought out.

    I feel like I'm rambling now, so I'll shut up, again I look forward to the conclusion of this story whenever it appears.
    Thanks :D

    Ok hopefully this works,
    ps sorry if this get posted multiply times.
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  • From Lady_Arachne on October 15, 2013
    Once again, you've managed to be awesome and write a wonderful story! I thought that this was going to be the last chapter, but I'm glad that another one is coming soon, especially when it's going to take place in the future~! Looking forward to it~! :D
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  • From Lady_Arachne on October 15, 2013
    Once again, you managed to be awesome and right a wonderful story, Star~!! I thought that this was the last chapter, but I'm glad that another one is coming soon, especially when it's taking place a couple years in the future~! Looking forward to it~! :D
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  • From ANON - ToshimiOkami on October 13, 2013
    Love this fic soo much!! Looking forward to more rise of the drakens though XD
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  • From SayokoHime on October 13, 2013
    Noooooo! You killed Grant! ;_; you have legitimately made me cry in this chapter. I will miss Grant, more than any other character in this story. But the story is coming to an end, a happy one yes? So that's good. It also means more rise of the drackens! So I will wait and enjoy what's left. And as pre-emptive as this is, thank you for an amazing story! Its not easy to get me to cry over a story and you have achieved it, so again thank you.
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