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Reviews for The Tribulation of the Blue Moon

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - angle wings on October 13, 2013
    this is an amasing story and i love this chapter. i had thought that this one was the last as t ended so well. looking forward to the net one. i love all your fics
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  • From ANON - christine jannsen on October 13, 2013
    hey star
    Amazing chapter! Im so sad that this story is coming to a close, FenrirxHarry is one of my favorite pairings and not many people do stories for them and then my favorite author writes one, I was estatic! Ive been reading and following you since the life and trials of harry and draco, I love your work so much you are an amazing writer I only wish I could write like you do one day. I cant wait for rise of the drackens to start up again, ill be here cheering you on as you write it!

    I do have one question though, I saw the review you left at the bottom of this last chapter of tribulation, and I was wondering when you said that harry doesn't have access to his money, wouldn't it be prudent, now that Sirius is back in harrys life that he would help him out some more? I would totally see Sirius as the type to be bringing harry all kinds of stuff to help them out in the wild, trying to take care of harry from afar. I know fenrir probably wouldn't stand for that but I could totally see Sirius doing that. But its just my thoughts on the matter! keep up the fantastic work I can wait for the next chapter and drackens to start up again!

    with much love,
    Christine
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  • From ANON - Me on October 13, 2013
    *dance around in joy* this was so good I laughed I cried I yelled and then I cried some more but it was so good, only took me three hours to read
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  • From ANON - darklady on October 13, 2013
    Aww I wanted to cry when I read that Grant died. But life goes on. So happy that Harry's 3 newest babies were born without any problems. And wow what an amazingly long chapter :) Can't wait till the last one. And then back to ROTD! Yay!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 13, 2013
    Yep, good chapter...nice and long to. Can't Sirius give Harry some money from the Black vaults or Kingsley arrange for the Potter vaults be turned to the minestry who makes a trust for Harry's "cousin" the last Potter??? Then they could buy land in transylvania or somewhere and build a life and have a few comforts like a huge house for the pack or an old castle. Hey if your going to have a creature story you might as well go for the perfect ending!
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  • From ANON - Jayne on October 12, 2013
    You asked for epic reviews, so for the first time ever, I'm leaving a review on here cuz you deserve it!!!

    First of all, chapter 10 was phenomenal! Long, but every detail was appreciated and in my opinion necessary!

    The scene with the final battle was so emotionally charged, and I teared up (which I never do, reading) when the death toll was given. The emotions of the pack were conveyed to the point I felt empathetic toward them, like I could feel their pain.

    The beating of Bernice was well written, but I think that one of my favorite parts of this entire chapter was the acceptance Harry showed and enforced toward Burne, and Burne's (undescribed but inferred) protection of the pups.

    The descriptions of Fenrir's emotions in this chapter, and giving a smidge from his point of view, was also enlightening. The jealousy, the feelings when he wants to admit love, everything... While anyone who has read this fic to this point knows Fenrir loves Harry, seeing it written out that way is touching.

    As for the four new little pups, my only question with them is are they werewolves... You mentioned they were a month old (so around or slightly past their first full moon) but didn't mention whether they had lycanthropy or not, and according to previous chapters they weren't guaranteed to have it.

    That's my only question about the chapter, and other than that it's a well written, fantastic chapter where every question is answered that I could think of. Quite a tear jerker. Bravo!


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  • From angeljin on October 12, 2013
    I, well, I really can not think of any other way to phrase this. I love you and your stories! Learning that you've updated a story is like a birthday present, Yule present, sleeping in, chocolate, and coffee all combined. And this chapter was like a triple-shot!

    I'm so glad that those evil, conniving, little bitches are gone. And while I love Harry's new babies, Harry really needs to have a baby girl. It would so funny to have an all male pack trying to figure out how to raise a little girl.
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  • From ANON - Fan2013 on October 12, 2013
    I love this chapter! You did a great job on this story! I really like how you bring it all together in this chapter! Very well written!
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  • From ANON - Kiseki_x3 on October 12, 2013
    OMG!!!! I LOVED this chapter! you are an amazing writer star!! I can't even pick a favorite part because, it was all just that good!!!
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  • From Jan on October 11, 2013
    Absolutely loved this chapter, especially the parts where Harry beats the shit out of those bitches. Though I hope he gets to have a go on Bernice, what she did to him needs payback, more so now that she betray them.

    Please update chapter 10 soon.
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on October 03, 2013
    I love a catty Harry, hes absolutly amazing. hell if i had Fenrir id be flaunting it too.....i mean....hell....nevermind you get it. i really hope that they kill all the females, they're really pissing me off and im a female. Amazing chapter Star can't wait for more!
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  • From Lady_Arachne on September 29, 2013
    That bitch! I hope that nothing bad happens to Harry, the twins, the pack, and Fenrir!! Well, I wouldn't mind if those females got hurt. I want Bernice to live after the attack, so that Fenrir and Harry can torture her before killing her!! >:D

    Looking forward to the next chapters~! :D
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  • From ANON - Guest-Cause-I'm-too-Lazy-to-Sign-in on September 29, 2013
    Awwww they have to escape!! Fenrir has to notice something then beat the shit out of Bernice then leave the females there while the pack leaves!!!!
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  • From NinaSweets on September 28, 2013
    Oh yaaay! Thank you :) made my day :) another awesome chapter. I can't believe it'll all be over soon :( I'll miss it heaps but I can't wait to see how you end it :)
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  • From angeljin on September 28, 2013
    I'm sorry that this chapter gave you so much trouble. :( I have to say, I really love how Harry beat the crap out of Emily. Now if only Fenrir or Harry had/would kill Bernice; I really hate her.
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