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Reviews for First and the Last Time

By : calmchick
  • From DisneyFanOfRainbows on October 24, 2020

    Hm interesting please updated soon.


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  • From katsplay68 on January 03, 2017

    OMG! I hope you are going to finish this, or if you had where can I find it.  I want to see Ginny get what's coming to her. I never did like her character anyway.


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  • From calmchick on October 16, 2015
    Its a great start so far but I was wondering how Neville can find out he is preganant and then 2 years later the twins are 2 years old...wouldn't they be 2 years minus 9 months...so 1year 3 months old??and if Neville is in Australia how does he still have contact with everybody in England? and why did he name is child firstly after another persons mother and then his own...shouldn't it be Alice Lily? Because his own mother is more important to him?

    Thanks for review sera, just to answer a few of your question. As far as the twins age they are indeed two year, I don't count from the time they were in the womb, two years from the time they were born, so they are indeed two years old. Neville does indeed have contact with England- as established in the chapter, he has been in contact with both Harry and Severus. As far as Neville naming process, his mother is indeed important to him, but he also has great admiration for Lily Potter as well, who died in order to protect her son. He would do the very same for his children. So that's why he has Lily first....plus it sounds better. Hope this answered your question.
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  • From ANON - sera on October 15, 2015
    Its a great start so far but I was wondering how Neville can find out he is preganant and then 2 years later the twins are 2 years old...wouldn't they be 2 years minus 9 months...so 1year 3 months old??and if Neville is in Australia how does he still have contact with everybody in England? and why did he name is child firstly after another persons mother and then his own...shouldn't it be Alice Lily? Because his own mother is more important to him?
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  • From ANON - sarah on September 24, 2015
    I really enjoyed the first two chapters. I can wait to see what will happen in the next chapter and did Ginny really do something to them or was it someone else. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Coop on August 07, 2015
    Your story has my interest can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2015
    ooo please update soon this is such good story! I hope they get back together!
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  • From ANON - AnonymousTigress on August 04, 2015
    Uh oh, someone's going to be in trouble. And it's my favorite female menace. Interesting read. I like.
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  • From ANON - starr on August 04, 2015
    OMG that was Ginny AGAIN with all her shit, she is the resin Nevelle is not with them !!!!!!!! OMG they all need to kill her !!!!! Well you can quest that I'm not a Ginny fan !!!!! Neville and Harry need to well I don't know what but have to do something !!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll be here waiting for your next update !! :):):):):):)):) Waiting for all the redheads to kill her too !!!and Snape
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  • From ANON - starr on August 04, 2015
    ***** chapter 1 was already posted !!!!!!!!
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  • From Jan on August 01, 2015
    An intriguing start, though that letter was a but shady to me, did something happen to Blaise and Draco that forced them to write it? Please update chapter 2 soon.
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  • From ANON - starr on July 31, 2015
    Wow what a start !!!!!!!! more soon :):):)
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  • From ANON - Moon Whistler on July 31, 2015
    A great new story, but very sad 1st chapter, I hope Neville be happy and meets someone special, who can love him and the baby (wonder if his former 'mates' would be jealous) and hope that Neville can be reunited with Harry, Hermione and all of his other friends.
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