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for To Have Not

by MontanaDan

person Chantelli
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah for updates! But you\'re torturing your readers so! Can\'t we have a tiny glimmer of Snarry to tide us over? A kiss, a hug, a cordial pat on the head? ANYTHING! Ah well, update soon.
person yay
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY u updated.. ^_^ man.. the beginning of the chap was fantastic. i loved it and it almost made me think.. screw harry/snape.. make this a luc/harry story! well.. i hope you update sooner and make it a snarry again
person Jaima
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By far one of my favorite stories! I get excited when I see an update. I am starting to like Lucius a little, is there a way out for all??? Who would help old luc through a breakup???
person Lady Gray
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh and the plot thickens. Lucius is planning on either getting himself or more likely Harry pregnant, sneaky sneaky. And who is Draco\'s secret love? A new character? Or maybe he has feelings for lucius himself? Severus better hurry up or it will be too late. At least harry done\'s seem to be falling in love with Lucius, I cracked up when he said it would be too much of a bother to move again. jeez thats romantic. I hope you update soon. thanks for writing
person Ari
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I was sad with how he rejected him. Though it is believable.
person cj
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is so heartbreaking, i can\'t wait until sev and harry get back together. please hurry!
person elfie
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a wonderful story! please continue soon!
love, elfie
person Chantelli
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All together too much Malfoy and not enough Snarry! Still, updates are always a joyful occasion! More updates! QUICK!
person antipyro
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just loved the dressing session - so much NOT like Harry - totally out of his element and doing well - love it. ...and the Draco touch, priceless.

Really liked the clubbing outfit discussion - suitable indeed! lol

The Severus dream sequence, was Harry just reliving and remembering about Severus and him after sex with Lucius? Very nice details in there too. I wonder if Lucius noticed Harry\'s movements during the dream?????

Your writings flow so nicely together, never rushed or complicated but full of intricate little details that weave in so deliciously.

Can\'t wait for Harry to use all those clothes at whatever function they go to, never mind the engagement party with Severus there. Will Harry get another head ache???
person Lothirielwen
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Lucius!! I love how he is..... (fits in well with the type of guy I went for in high school, still have a soft spot for them)

You have done a great job with keeping him in character..... I\'m sure that he would be actng this way should something like this happen.... I just don\'t have to like the fact that he is basicly using Harry to get ahead or at least back to where he was. It doesn\'t bode well for either of them.....

I hope that Harry realizes before it\'s to late that he can\'t ever be happy with Lucius and does soemthing about it to make things better for himself.

Great job!! Look forward to more

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