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for To Have Not

by MontanaDan

person lady Gray
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad you udated! I love this story. Whats wrong with harry exactly? Will he choose severus or lucius? I can hardly wait to find out! I hope you update again soon. thanks for writing.
person lilith
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
With Harrys thoughts about being top it would be a smart idea of Lucius to become pregnant with Harrys child. Harry surely would never leave him then, if not because he loves him, then out of duty. When I started reading this story I wished Harry would get together with Severus, but now it seems to me Harry and Lucius could really work out. Update soon!
person myniephoenix
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was so good.... probably the best thus far... nice and long.. and incredible personal detail... update again soon
person sbkar
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
blaggard (you wrote it as someone speaking very quickly might say it) -- should be...

blackguard

black
person Threesisters
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is going to make him pregnant isn\'t he. Oh hell, I just don\'t know how
Severus is going to counter that! Unless he gets to Harry first and impregnates him
yes I like that. Arrange that please, in your own perfect way.
person mira
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sev needs to get a move on it! harry cant exist in such a meaningless place without wasting away. update sooooon!
person cj
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! but i desparately want harry back with severus! i hope you update soon, i can\'t wait for them to get back together. if you email ppl when you update, i would love an email. i would hate to lose track of such a great story!
person Aisling
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh i luv this-- no i have not read the prequel --i wil;l go and do so now.. i read them in the wrong order what of it? the point is this is great!! im mkinda tied, i want Harry and Sev to be happy and luv each other, but im just so fond of the H/L pairing i want them to be together too... ggrrr!! u need to update soon so i can... well read more cause im sure the conclusion to my dilema is a long time coming LOL :P :P Wow i think this is one of the longest reviews i have ever writen LOL :P cya huni xxx
person yui
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it and cant wait 4 the next chapter.
person Aggis
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love, love, love this. Have to go, busy day at work, which of course isn\'t a proper place to read this but :) I\'m addicted.

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