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for Burdens of the Heart

by innocentimp

person Ceris
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really really good!!!!! please write more~!!!!!
person holli
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent!! i really like this chapter, i think it shows a lot of progress in the relationship between severus and harry. its very realistic, a lot of ss/hp stories, they resolve their issues to fast, this was very good. i like how harry is handling thigns too, its realistic as well. i can't wait to read more, keep up the good work!
person Ari
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was oddly sweet. I liked it though.
person Anon
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very nice story!!! I absolutely hope, that you will continue it and if at all possible, please do so soon!!!
person Serpent
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was pretty cute. I can\'t wait for the snary to commence, though i like how you;\'re not jumping into it. It kinda seems like Snape is jealous of Charlie, won\'t it be cute when he figures that out aswell, and realize this life\'s work is just a conveniant excuse... or maybe i\'m fishing for snarry goodness, who knows. In any case, keep up the good work, and i hope you update soon! Ja-ne
person cj
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. There aren\'t enough hp/ss post hbp so i really appreciate the good ones. if you could send me an email when you update, i would love it!! keep up the great work!
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good... Harry really doesn\'t need to have Charlie unto him at the moment . Thang god Snape was around and he\'s the only one who\'s actually responsible...
person Menecarkawan
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe. I love Snape. He always makes me feel better, what with his snipping and groaning about every little thing. He\'s just such a lovely stress reliever. I am curious to see how you\'re going to get them working together, much less sleeping together. I think I shall add you to my favorites and find out! Yes, that\'s exactly what I\'ll do! *runs off to take care of it*
person Menecarkawan
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Most intriguing. *rubs chin thoughtfully* I like the way you\'ve interpreted HBP and worked it into this fic. You made it sound believable and sincere, not an easy task for certain. I think I shall head to the next chapter and see what happens!
person Menecarkawan
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t find this chapter tedious at all. It was very good. I like the idea of Harry going into Auror training to receive the skills he needs to win. I also like the way Remus reacted to it. I think it was spot on with his personality. On to the next!

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