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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it and can't wait for more chapters
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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE....Please gives us More
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is a good one so far, but you are very much in need of a beta reader. So far your spelling stinks.
Examples-
The word DYEING is not spelled that way, but DYING
This isn't the only time you've forgotten to take the E off of the end of a word when added ING.
STAREING is wrong. It's STARING.
Get yourself a beta reader, or if not use a spell check. Your stories can only become better for it.
Examples-
The word DYEING is not spelled that way, but DYING
This isn't the only time you've forgotten to take the E off of the end of a word when added ING.
STAREING is wrong. It's STARING.
Get yourself a beta reader, or if not use a spell check. Your stories can only become better for it.
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good!!! Update more soon!!!
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January 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story,but you have to update. I'm hungry to read more. ;P