rate_review Reviews

My only note is that I hope James gets a shot of maturity soon. Its not like he's been in a coma for 12 years or has selective amnesia.. it doesn't make sense for him to be doing such a piss poor job at being a father.. Even if you don't alter the events of the book much, James is coming across as annoying and insincere. More interested in maintaining his anonymity and banging Lucius (though I'm always a fan of good smut scenes) than making up for effectively abandoning the son he supposedly loves. I'd wonder if Harry was Lucius' and his child might he have shown more regard? Inserting James into the picture makes for an interesting twist, but I don't see any deep impact his being alive has on Harry- he might as well be dead, with Sirius and Remus filling in the superficial father-figure moments

LOL! Poor Sev... will there ever be anything between him and James? or Sirius and James for that matter? or is it going to stay strictly James and Lucius?

Please update chapter 19 soon ^_^

Jan

Excellent chapter.... as always *winks*

Please update chapter 18 soon ^_^

Jan

Poor James. Where is Draco?

i see you story and a first i did not read but now that i have read it and love the plot and the way yu have to the story going i fell in love with the story and can not wait for more of the story and see wht happen next to the story . i love the way yu have jamis and louis in love . will the sons be next or will u have harry and sev. i can not wait to see. up date soon love the story

I just love this story and I can so relate on the RL butting into fanfiction fun. Hope things are going better and to see an update soon. Thanks.

I actually like this with James showing up alive. Harry and Draco seem to be starting a friendship, hope it continues. I always thought they would be good together. Only found this story a few days ago. Keep the chapters coming!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome story!!!! I can't wait to find out what else happens between Draco and Harry!!!

Awesome story!!!! I can't wait to find out what else happens between Draco and Harry!!!

It would be nice to see more of James teasing Severus.