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for Ultimate Betrayal

by KaiDragon

schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am dying to know where you are going. I also I'm also getting very worried for Harry. You have to give some clue how is surviving "that place". I don't mean to tell you how to write or anything. I am enjoying the story. Good job.
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another update? Wow, you work fast. Not that I'm complaining! *winks* I can't wait for Harry to meet the Charmed crew!
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't expecting another update so quickly! So far this is wonderful. I would like to see more of Harry, and I'm glad we got to see Wyatt, but I guess it's hard to talk about HArry when he can do nothing but wait out time in a cell. Anyway, again this is brilliant so far and I can't wait to see another update!
person 261012
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it. i cann't wait until the next chapter.
person alma
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Harry has the twin's support. Good chapter.
person alma
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person sanda
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice!! I love the chapter and your welcome for the review! i can't wait for more!!!
person poohbear74
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, love that Neville is not against Harry and that he now knows how Harry feels about being the chosen one!.
Another Great chapter , That I can't wait for more.
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEAAAAAAAAA now we're getting to the nitty gritty...I'm LOVING IT!!

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