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I love the way she ask her to have breakfast. a bit romantic and erotic at the same time.

Dear Gods.... You are insanely good at this. I've already cracked, like, 10 times over.

Severus is keeping her on her toes! Hermione must be going insane since he always seems to do just what she doesn't expect.

Perfect. *evil grin*

I loved the grip-the-seat-command. I find a simple command to maintain a position on my own much harder to accomplish, since one can get easily distracted and forget about minor things like hands and such, yet such a command is so much more - I don't know whether that makes any sense at all - 'binding' than loads and loads of rope. Who has the space for fully equipped dungeons anyhow? Well. Besides people living in Manors with dungeons. Or teachers in castle boarding schools, who live in the dungeons anyhow. Never mind me, there goes the overactive imagination of mine.

Love the story! :)

wow what a fabulous chap... i love how you can set the chap on fire without having to have any sex in it.. well there is sex but not the conventional kind you know the whole act but you make it all sex the way severus talks and the things he says to hermione... her responses and the reaction that they get from severus... the light caresses... fab job... i think that they have what the other needs and once they get into a serious relationship i think they will be really happy... hermione needs someone to take control in all of her life she has been the one in control you know making harry and ron study always having the right answer to get them out of a sticky situation and i think severus has always needed someone to need him not for what he could do for him but just bc he is him... the only hook in this whole thing, i think anyway, is severus what happens when he realizes how much he actually needs her i think he will clam up a little bit?? anyhoo wonderful job and i do sooo love your blog i think i will really like it when you are between stories...

Where can I find moon orchid!! I would be totally willing to pay for that lovely... flower? Lol. I love how Severus as able to to turn it on, and then with a snap of his fingers, go back to being stern and in control, leaving Hermione confused once again. The man certainly knows what he's doing!
But he is afraid that he will let her down? In what manner? I know he's been warding her off him, but this is something he soooo needs. Im keeping my fingers crossed for a HEA with a twist!

I really like this story. I am also reading Mad Snorkacks and Englishmen right now; it is not bad, but the discipline is harsh and violent. I much prefer this gentle, cerebral approach.

great chappy.i can understand why his is going slow.however if it driving me nuts then poor hermione must be going out of her mind.

Chapter 9 - Oh, honey, I trust you. :-) No worries. And, I loved your explanation of this type of relationship. I, like Hermione, apparently have a lot to learn. lol The basis of all of it is respect and love, which makes it beautiful in its balance. Perfectly lovely... onto chapter 10...

Chapter 10 - That was sensuality at its best. His control (and I mean that in a good way) of himself and her is amazing to read. It's almost tantric. It makes me sad for him that he feels he must test her and prove himself to her so much. It shows how much he's been hurt, poor man. Last, I hope she gets used to that unbalanced feeling, since I think she will be feeling it often. lol

Thanks, as always,
HG4eva

Whew! Back to school week is even worse - I missed two updates :( Oh well, more to read now. So *catches breath* what an update indeed! I had no idea reading a book could be so erotic. Good god that man is hot!!! I can't think of more to say, because all I can actually think is 'read the next chapter... NOW!'

I'd wear a corset & skirt for him every minute! What a wonderful way to eat breakfast too - lucky girl! I felt frustrated at the beginning w/ the slow build, but now it's almost comforting. He's easing himself and Hermione into this & I can see how his past relationships are impacting this one. Hopefully, he doesn't give up on her. If he does, then I'll be the one growling :)