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by soldiersgirl0709

person Jade
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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person Aundree'a
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo that Nigel! What a prick! I would deliver a swift kick to his manly area, and then leave him to pay the entire bill! Some men! But I have no worries :). I love that everything has been layed out on the table for Severus... I know he's itching to give in! Can't wait to read more!!
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the imagery of Hermione and puppy both longing for his affection. I'm not usually into hardcore domination and pain, but with you writing it, I think I'll be okay. ha ha ha I am actually looking forward to her getting a little "punished" really soon. Snape can only hold out so long! Thanks, luv! HG4eva
person sassmacfru
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! new story! is happy now and sequels are all ways good! you keep writting and I will keep reading. ;)
person Rumple
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't going to read this and then I saw the name of the author. I really love reading your stories. Its such a pleasure to read a story knowing that it will get finished, not left in the limbo of the 'works in progress abyss." Also, this is the first time I have reviewed a story that wasn't written by my kids. That's how much I enjoy your stories and thought it was time to tell you.
person smmz79
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHHHHAATTTT ok so i totally did not see that coming... woo hooo this is going to be good!!!!!! ok so i love the way that you write i know i have said that a lot but you capture these characters soo beautifully i mean the way you write their inner dialogue and i really can feel exactly what they are feeling!!!! ok so i am at work so i may not get to all five chaps but i am going to try!!!!!!!!!!
person smmz79
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohhh wow that was an interesting chap i was wondering when his curiousity would get the best of him.... those last entries were very mild but steamy they left a good amount to the imagination... LOVED the shower bit!!!!
person smmz79
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow powerful chap you have severus fighting a losing battle and hermione FEELING like she is fighting a losing battle i am very interested to see what is the final straw... very hot masturbation there with severus very hot and too bad i am at work i had to stop reading a couple of times...
person smmz79
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeahhhh i am so happy that you have another story out and you are working on a dramione i LOVE the way you write draco in those.... ok so is severus feeling a little green hmm i wonder??? loved the first five and i can not wait for the next why do i have a feeling that seeing hermione get dressed up to go on a date will help move things along for severus... hmmmmm
person KellyJCR
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't kid yourself sweetie there is love out there for everyone. It took me a long while to figure that out, it just takes time and tons of patience. As far as Severus and Hermione go... He has far more self control than I give him credit for. All things considered with his history and his friendship with Hermione I would think it would be obvious that this was different altogether. Of course that is esier said than done (I would know). I love that fact that you have introduced a dog into the story. I am a dog person and cats are all well and good but, dogs have a very loving depth that cats can't touch. I miss mine she passed 7 years ago and I can't bring myself to get another. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!

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