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Yehhh, does a little happy dance - she's back!!

Very intriuging start, can't wait to see where you're going with this one. Glad Severus is back in the saddle, my favourite pairing, although I love a bit of Lucius too.

Look forward to more very soon.

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This seems a bit different for you. By that I mean the style of writing. With the exception of chapter 5 it seemed very internal. All thoughts and longing. The reason I'm sure is that you have to set up the desire factor for Hermione. Am I wrong that it comes across as an almost obsessive yearning to be with "him" in the way she needs. At times it so very deperate almost sad. I can easily see the reasons that Hermione is turning down the road she is traveling. People who are in control all the time do well to give over completly in their sexual encounters. Severus I'm not so sure about. Is it that he has been a dominant already or does he simply a convient shag and is willing to make concessions. Either way this is sure to be an inteanse ride. Glad to see you back. Can't wait for more. Well done!! (By the way kudos to you about the blog I'll be a frequent reader.)

So here I am looking for a GREAT NEW FIC and I stumbled across your new fic!! YEA YEA YEA!!! I am so excited to read this, I haven't even started it and I already know that I will LOVE IT!!! So how many chapters do I have to look forward to??? YEA YOUR BACK!!!!!!

As always your plot lines can not be faulted, my teeth are certainly biting into this story, consider me caught lol, eagerly awaiting your updates, big fan from UK.

the first 5 chaps were fab! there is so much sexual tension between them it can be cut with a fingernail. lol!

in my opinion, sev is a sex god, hands down. there will be no worries about him and hermione. he can bring her to orgasm one after another i'm sure. nothing is wrong with her. sev is the simple, but complicated solution. :p

can't wait for more!!!

I wish I'd waited until the story was all posted before starting because now I'm disappointed there isn't more to read now...lol...Good work as always, I loved the diary part, thought Sev might have a stroke...And so far Hermione is more or less the way I picture her...

Loving it so far! Can't wait to see what finally causes Snape to break down and go after what he wants.

I am sooooo happy that you're back! I've missed your stories! I'm loving it!
A dark Hermione, is much much better than the sweet and caring we all know ... (:
Good luck with the story!

I reviewed on a different site, but had to write again. I'm loving this story! I wonder if you actually could write a story I don't like... doubtful :) As for this chapter, lovely! Aren't jealous men entertaining? Even Sev gets caught up in the testosterone nonsense - sneering & sarcastic. Why don't they just growl & be done with it! *sly grin* Seriously, he should growl - that would be very, very nice.

Once again, I find myself immediately pulled into one of your amazing stories. I'm already pining for another installment. Your creativity and way with words never ceases to astound me. I've been a lurker on this site for quite sometime...perhaps one day I shall post something of my own. Alas, it would be posted next to something like your fantastic tales and seem completely amateur. I love your stories, so keep up the great work!