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for Delicate

by soldiersgirl0709

person Tenar10r
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
person Jenn
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I loved this story! It was great :) I'd definately read a sequel if you were to write it. Not sure why you were getting weird reviews, I like all your stories and this one is no different! Keep up the good work and don't let them get you down!
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the ending! It's awesome, closure and yet a way to know that we can imagine how their affection can grow. Delicate is my fave story so far!!!! I can't wait to read more of your tales. Actually I am right now lol. I can't see why this one story would put people off from you. I've read some of your older ones and this one is along the same lines with less humor. I still love all you've written I do look forward to reading more as you grow as an author.

Lady Serin
person Aundree'a
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must admit... the ending does feel a little empty... but it was a good way to end it. I loved this fic. It was a great read. One of my favorites from you. Don't let the tough reviews on this one get you down. I LOVED IT! Can't wait to see what you have in store for us with Remus and Draco, and I'm keeping my fingers crossed that you make a sequel!
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story... great ending. Thanks!
person shelagh
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful job!!! Well done. Why did you seem to have trouble with this one? From this end of the process you would never realize you were having issues.
person Liz
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing this. I have enjoyed checking in daily for updates and reading it as it was posted. I admit I don't review very frequently, but it saddened me to see you mention that some reviews for this story weren't so complimentary, so I thought I would post one that was. D/s relationships fascinate me, and this one was written out so well -- it was so much more than just kink, it was about a real emotional relationship between two people (which, I know, was one of the primary goals of this story). Hermione seemed a bit OOC, but that hardly bothers me, as the character was still very well written for this story. So, anyway, thank you again for writing and posting the story to completion. :)
person bbgirl
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg, what in the hell is this? I mean woah, everything was fine and cute until chapter 7 and I saw all this domination BS and was like WOAH....

I'm sorry but this story is definitely not my style, the whole submission thing and kinky sex crap isnt my thing, it scares the hell out of me. :S anyways, had to let you know how creepy and just fucked up I think this story is..delete my review if you want, get mad all you want...I'm not reading it anymore...*creeped out*
person mayrz
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE LOVE LOVE all your stories.. admittedly this is one of my favs! I'm not usually a Sev/Mione shipper, I do love my luscious Lucis.. But this one had me reading all 19 chapters till 3am..
love your work!
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!! That is all. :-) Thank you! HG4eva

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