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I just am not sure where to start. Gretchen kind of gave Severus the smack he needed. (Can you tell I think he needs a REAL smack for saying he didn't do anything to make her cry?!?) They had to confront this somehow though. I don't think I've ever read anything more true (and hilarious) in my life than this -

I knew there would be a proclamation of love but I didn't expect it to come from Severus' mouth first lol. Great chapter, though I'm sad to see it coming to an end. I am glad that Severus can admit his feelings though. I love the way you have given Severus a sense of humanity, though I notice you make him human in every story. I commend you for that great effort.

Lots of writer's love,
Lady Serin

Ack! Evil cliffie!....Great chapter though.

Another great chapter! I'm late in reading but my BF thought it a good idea to end summer with a bang! Lol He took us up in a plane where he got to pilot an then we let ourselves go wild at Great America lol. I'm pleased that you won't be taking this one down it was quickly become my fave by far. I've been reading your older stories as well and I must say I love them too!!! I can't wait to read more and I can't wait for another chapter. Keep up the great work!!!

Lots of love

Lady Serin

Ohh, How Much I Love this story!
How much i love all of your stories,
Well done!!
xxx
Alex
Brilliant chapter by the way, love it..

ok where do i begin..... hmmm ok so about your blog... first i have to say i love the pics of sev and i laughed at the one about girly hair... ha ha.... obviously SG you mean a lot to a lot of people and i would just like to say that i am very sorry about your husband i never knew i mean you left hints in some of your AN's but i did not want to pry... i have been through a divorce and it hurt like hell no we did not have kids and i only gave him five years of my life but on some levels i think i can relate although each experience is unique to the people involved just know that if you need to talk you can e-mail me just ask for my e-mail address and i will reply with it... if not i totally understand as well... :-) ok on to the fic ummm what a great chap i love that severus had to bare his soul in front of the potters that was great and fitting i laughed at the transition that harry made one minute he is a fierce protector the next he is a little squicked by severus and hermione... i could not believe she used the phrase and over something emotional i liked that it wasn't only based on sex you are right in wanting to make this more like an everyday relationship and i think you have helped to erase some of the stereotypes that are around about D/s relationships... so i wonder what will happen next with hermione... hmm should be good... ok so the next chap is the last so that means it is timefor me to sound utterly pathetic and ask or whine... sooo how long are we going to be tortured without your next fic??? i mean seriously iam like an addict here i am starting to twitch... :-) oh and thank you for answering my question about the phantom i was curious i 'thought' that maybe that was where you were going but i was not sure and yummy dark remus this should be good and yaahhh scary dr/hg although i will have to make sure i am not in a jumpy mood when i read it i mean the freaking title has me shivering 'the dollhouse' brrrrr ok well that is all darling i hope you are well and as always i sooo cannot wait for the next chap... :-)

HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!! That was to good. I love it when Severus gets so emotional that he forgets himself. I new Gretchen would point him in the right direction. I am sorry to see this story coming to a close but, I know you promissed tidbits here and there. So woohoo for that. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!!

I am overjoyed that you have decided not to take this story down. I noticed that after reading your blog that I too have read much worse on this site. If anyone can not see the differences between the emotional complexity of this and others that are D/S only to go a completly different way altogether should NOT be reading adult oriented fiction. Okay I think I've finally said my peace.

go after him you fool!

since the next chap is the last, there's got to be a full blown lemon. LOL!

whoops! i meant her for my review. my bad. :P

Finally he admits it, now to find his witch, lol. Brilliant story, as are ALL your stories, no matter what genre they are!!