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by soldiersgirl0709

person Aundree'a
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kate Perry hit it on the head when she wrote that song!!! It was perfect for this chapter. I swear, I don't think any woman will ever know how a man thinks, especially me!.
They continue to drive me out of my mind day in and day out! Finally someone has knocked some sense into Serverus. I felt bad for Hermione though... but not for long ... She's going to get it soon enough! Lol. Can't wait to read more!
person drowning_not_waving
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that is so romantic! im going to be re-reading this over and over!!!!!!
you are such a great writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
<3 becky
person Mmajere
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot despite the initial misgivings about domination stuff. Who am I to judge? Your last chapter was a great cliffie. Can't wait to see what happens. Thank you for a complex and interesting story.
person Tara
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... Severus better fix this quick or he might just push Mione to far!
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry for all you're going through. Depressions or funks can really exhaust you. I know you don't know me, but I am sending good thoughts your way. :-) As for the story, I will be sorry to see it end, but I trust you'll have another coming soon. ;-) Poor Hermione, she might not survive Severus' issues. He has to open up sooner or later...

Thanks, hon. Feel better,
HG4eva
person Jade
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter
person makaem
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great.
person kittycat30
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*deep breath* Yeah, NOT hating Gretchen right now - Severus however... I think it's time for his little pity party to end - with a smack from just about anyone! He can tell himself he's testing her all he wants, but we know he's scared. Dying for the next morning!!!
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha Sevy is just ornery enough to do that while holding a conversation with McGonagall.

"Mouse." Hehe
person neelix
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well, I am all for emotional roller coasters if it helps you to turn out writing like this. And yep, I do know exactly what you mean, the emotional thing, the smallest thing sets you off... there are times that I even hate Severus when I feel like that, too. It won't last, you'll be fine. Just keep writing, it will help... it really will!

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