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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please Please Please Update soon!
I really loved it!
I really loved it!
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February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
brilliant story. Update soon.
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't see why you were nervous about this. This is brilliant.
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work! Love to see MORE
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I love this! Utter brilliance and I expect more!
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesom!
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wish you were more detailed in your description of the characters. It would give the story more depth. Overall, the plot seems promising.
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter! I am completely blown away by all that you have written here and can't wait for more! Keep up the great work!!!
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome story