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for It Was Supposed to be Over

by nmos

schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't think it's horrible--you bring up a couple of good points and your writing style is clear and detailed. You also give an excellent description of the effects that PTSD and survivor's guilt can have. beta'd or not, I noticed only a few small errors and they were nothing to worry about, really. As for the rejections by other websites: their loss, our gain. Have a good time.

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