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for Golden Hearts

by BetaBloodLust

person nox_lumen
schedule April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed up to the last chapter. I'm surprised you only got one review since you developed the story so well. Sadly thought, the last chapter is a duplicate of the one right before.

Also, it's mentioned that Arumus has fantasies about Draco? Would it be possible to have a look at one? Though I wouldn't expect him to rush anything, it would be nice to see a bit of what he's not rushing into by way of dreams.
person lpicw
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you that this is a great story. Arumus is such a facinating character, please don't turn him into a Gary Stu, give him some academic challenges, make him face someone who is his superior at magic and that is not a teacher or alike. I also had one request, and this is just for my pervert enjoyment, I know that he is gay and everything, and I really respect that but it is going to be really interesting if he tries with a girl for the sake of trying, just to be sure, and that is going to make Draco go balistic. You are a great writer and I am already your fan. XOXO Passion Quill.

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